| "What's Love Got To Do With It?" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: koumori wolf On: March 05, 2004 20:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, this is a great story so far. It has a lot of potential. You shouldn't let one bad review get ya down. This was good. It is beyond me, how you've only managed to get two reviews. This story is good enough for way WAY more. Please continue on your story. It's awesome so far, and I'd like to know what happens. So whenever ya get around to it, please update! ^-^ Ja!
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Title: YAY YAY YAY
Reviewed By: yumi-kazu On: September 16, 2003 04:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! don't listen to that slut of a reviewer. I LOVED DA FIRST CHAP! at least i HOPE it IS da first chappie cause i really want u to continue!!!!! tis great mate! |
Reviewed By: the Macabre On: September 15, 2003 19:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
ummm. . . OK but if there was lube it shouldn't be all that agonizingly painful. . . the real bitch is when there isn't any type of lubrication. . . . . Oh shit! i'm starting to sound like a porno expert! |
