| "First Love" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Schwarz tot schwarz das bloot [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2005 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was sweet story, and you deserve more reviews! You are one good writer, and I hope to see more of your work! ~*Peace*~
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Reviewed By: LeonhartLover On: December 01, 2003 09:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautifully done :) The first-person style of your writing is inspirational. The idea, although realy good, I think has been used a little too much in the past. I highly enjoyed this fic and hope to read many more. :)
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Reviewed By: Sai On: September 23, 2003 13:43 CDT
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(sniffle) That was, that was (starts bawling like a baby) Muwaaaahhh. (sniffle, sniffle) Sorry that was sad, but very good. Thanks I was in the mood for some angst and that really hit the spot. And I love how you write in first person, personally I find it difficult to do, but it seems to be a breeze for you. Great job
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