| "Speck" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 12:05 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You know, that was mean to stop right there. This story has a lot of potential. I hope you pick it up again someday.
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Reviewed By: lee-lee On: May 11, 2004 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story. I love reading V/G fanfics. Ur doin a great job. update soon.
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Reviewed By: lava java 286 On: September 21, 2003 00:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey great story i luved it! i really like the whole goku slave, vegeta master thing. write again soon!! |
Reviewed By: agent 182 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2003 23:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really loved it. ^_^ very good. i hope you update soon! |
Title: wansomore
Reviewed By: Zani don't feel like signing in On: September 14, 2003 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave a nine on originality/creativity because I've seen other Goku/Vegita fics where Goku is a slave and Vegita buys him out of slavory. I've even seen the refusal of Goku being called by any other name but Goku but all that is based on originality. Creatively I really like this story and your spin on the Goku/Vegita master/slave complex plus the twist of having Bulma thrown in the mix. Now that I have not seen before. I would like to see where you go with this fic so update soon. Ja ne |
Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2003 21:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey!1 I can't believe no one's written you a reveiw yet!! That was great, I usually don't even go for V/G stories, but I thought I'd give it a try 'cuz there was some V/B in it. It's a lot better than I thought. I'll be with ya' all the way! Can't wait for your next update! |
