| "Scottish flair for Excitement" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Moon bind [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 13:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Breath, in.....out....in...out, ok. My inner minds decided that death can't be aplied to you. You won this time but IF, you do that to Oliver one more time I swear! Nice fic.....excluding the flirtatious whore bit
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Reviewed By: Xx-One-Odd-Gurl-xX On: November 30, 2003 09:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eh.. this fic was okay... I kind of doubt Oliver acting like that though... I kind of think Olive would do more then just sniffle after getting called a flirtatous whore and all... I hope you update it soon though! I want to know what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Azzy On: October 26, 2003 13:51 CST
Comment/Review:
Oliver, a flirtatious whore? lol! Thats just too much! I can really see him doing that though..lol Him & Enrique make such a lovely couple!! ^o^
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