| "Mission: Can you win his heart?" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ] |
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Title: when u gonna write more?
Reviewed By: AnimeJunkie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2006 18:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have to see what u gonna do next. :)
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Reviewed By: Stwabewwy Cotton Candy On: March 05, 2004 20:17 CST
Comment/Review:
Ra, I haven't reviewed in a LONG time. HAPPY BILATED CHRISTMAS, NEW YEARS, AND VALENTINES!!! Wow, now that I got that outta my system, how's it goin'? Yami and Yuugi are getting married... KAWAII!!! Cho kawaii^^ ;_; meanie parents of his! I can't wait to see the looks on their faces when they see Yuugi has a boyfriend!!!
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Reviewed By: miami On: February 22, 2004 18:51 CST
Comment/Review:
isn't yamacha the guy who cheated on bulma in dbz? update soon
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Reviewed By: TabiWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2003 06:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good chapter, but why would anyone wanna make love with a dead corps in the room? all that blood and guts is just really creepy! TabiWolf
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Reviewed By: Savara On: November 16, 2003 21:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Savara:Jou talks funny. Just got done with chapter 7 and I want some of that candy. I didn't get any. *sniff sniff.* Rena:*snicker snicker* she didn't get any. Raven:*smiling* and she never will again. Savara: *looking through book* Raven smiling I''m sure that's a sign of the apocalypse. Rena:now you never are getting any more candy. Raven: You were talking about candy? Rena:What else did you think we were talking about sicko?*snickering again* Savara:Bye bye now!
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Title: hehehehe
Reviewed By: Samantha J.C On: November 16, 2003 03:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is a really great fanfic! I hope you write more....although in my opinon it had a little too much 'lemon' I now know what that means thanks to you hehehe anyway I realy liked the ending for that chapter it was so sweet! Oh but quick question,not that I have anything againsed gays why do somany people have them in there fics? particulary with the yamis and their vessels.
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Reviewed By: Amora Laflour On: November 11, 2003 22:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh that was great! i loved it! please keep going! oh yeah caught a few grammer mistakes but other then that it was terrific!
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Reviewed By: chaos911 On: November 07, 2003 19:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is so interesting...but why are you not updating????? i love it and will wait for new chappies!!!
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Reviewed By: HOLY KAMOLY On: November 04, 2003 17:08 CST
Comment/Review:
why aren't you updating, please, please don't tell me you're quiting, nooooooooooooooo- don't stop when getting real good please update.
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Reviewed By: HOLY KAMOLY On: November 04, 2003 17:08 CST
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why aren't you updating, please, please don't tell me you're quiting, nooooooooooooooo- don't stop when getting real good please update.
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Reviewed By: Holy Kamoly On: October 26, 2003 13:57 CST
Comment/Review:
dun dun dun duuuuuuunnnnnnn! Oh-no-what-will-hap-pen? I-must-find-out! Please-hur-ry. Thank-you. bye-i.
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Reviewed By: Darkness*Shadow666 On: October 26, 2003 13:38 CST
Comment/Review:
This is so depressing! T.T but UPDATE SOON!! it's really good too, even though it is sad. T.T
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Reviewed By: mlg On: October 20, 2003 15:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i ABSOLUTLY LOVE THIS FIC.... Please, Please, Please update this fic soon. Oh yeah and one more thing your a great author
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Reviewed By: Saiyan_Kitsune_Foxfire [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2003 23:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great. ~SKF
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Reviewed By: Stwabewwy Cotton Candy On: October 19, 2003 15:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
awwwwwww, poor Yami-san, turned on by Yugi-san.... and Marik is being a bastard in this O.o also acting very Marik like.... wow, you guys really know how to capture his character
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