| "The Kindness of Strangers" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: kindness of strangers
Reviewed By: black daragon16 On: March 09, 2004 18:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i'm not all that good at spelling and grammer but from what i could tell it was good, dont know if it was perfect but ok. I thought it was very origonall. and very discriptive too. I really reallu\y injoyed it. your a good writer!!!!
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Title: Momma Cat
Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2003 23:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
What are you doing writing lemons on MM? You should be doing romance novels. I mean you wrote the love scence just like they do, metaphores and everthing. Two thumbs up. |
Title: La Tarte De Cerise
Reviewed By: La Tarte De Cerise [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2003 21:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was an AWESOME lemon. usually i'm not a big fan of 13x5, but that was great. keep it up! i'm quite fine with this being a one-shot, but maybe you could possibly continue on the story somehow. |
