| "CHANGING DARKNESS" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: Fear Me On: January 22, 2004 09:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is an awesome story man. keep it up
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Reviewed By: hlpo On: January 21, 2004 00:25 CST
Comment/Review:
cool story.
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Reviewed By: emt10 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2004 20:57 CST
Comment/Review:
This is really good. It should be interesting to see how Asuka and shinji get along, as well as how Misato the Sith get along. I was also wondering if the sith would ever go any farther than thinking "I wouldn't mind a night with her,", "her" being misato. Thats all for now! emt10
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Reviewed By: Et On: January 16, 2004 19:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the coolest fucking Eva/Starwars fic ever!
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Reviewed By: Mike Manazure [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2004 13:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good fic, having a good OC, no OOC at all (Exelent!) and total Ikari bashing stuff (Both of them, the Bakemono-father and the Baka-son). Your spelling lacks a bit (did you have a beta reader? nether do I), and it took some of the enjoyment away. The lemony scene between a prostitute and Shinji is good, realistic and somewhat familiar *blush*
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