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| "CHANGING DARKNESS" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 › » ] | Reviewed By: mackon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2008 17:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really enjoying this, looking forward to more. thanks for sharing.
| Reviewed By: Marine Brother Shran [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2006 21:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I'm really loving what I'm reading here. *sigh* sadly, I wish this was a Shinji/Rei romance, however, it still works, and I feel sorry for Kensuke and Toji. One lost his life while the other lose the love of his life. Oh well, that's life, so it goes. However, I'm curious, is there going to be a threeway relationship? Or will this be a standard two-way? I'm just curious, because I wouldn't mind seeing more of Shinji unless...he's not meant to be one of the mains in this character. I would've loved to have seen him with at least some Jedi/Sith training, but it's your story. By the way, when you say light sword, don't you mean the Lightsabers of both Orders? Where did they go? Well anyways, that's all from me. Cheers ^^ Ja ne
| Title: OMGWTFBBQ
Reviewed By: WylotheUber [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2005 16:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Although it's probably my inner Star Wars nerd talking, this has to be the best fan-fic I've ever read (at least, on Mediaminer). You've made a lot of amazing developments, all of them fitting in, and all of them being described as they should be (such as the first look at a TIE Defender/X-Wing, or peoples' reactions to security guards heads imploding, courtesy of the Force). I was a little weirded out by the whole Rei's-a-Sith thing (I guess she just seems like more of a Grey Jedi to me), but that's easily offset by the great fic itself. Although it's a superb fanfic - not just because Star Wars and Evangelion are both utterly kickass, but because your writing style is superb - I do have a few critical complaints. First of all, it doesn't have the perpetuator of Jedi ass-whooping, Kyle Katarn, in it. Come on! Tenel Ka is the best you came up with? Secondly, Shinji is really creeping me out in this fic. Not just because of the whole water sport thing. He's just too Sith-like for my tastes, I guess. Ah, well. Third, Star Destroyers haven't made an appearance. Yes, I know, the Blade's probably more efficient than a SD, however, the Star Destroyer was a symbol of the might of the Empire (aside from the Executor-class SSDs and the Death Stars, of course), and were designed as much for combat as they were for intimidation. My final complaint is that nobody's been Force Choke'd to death yet. But, I assume it's coming (*coughGendocough*). At any rate, keep up the good work.
| Reviewed By: trouthook07054 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2005 18:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a great fanfic but 2 years and just now it's getting interesting? I'd be really interested to see if the first few reviewers are still reading this! You might want to update more often. Sorry to be blunt, maybe you're putting your heart and soul into the story personally I just think 2 years is too long to take to write a story unless it's updated more frequently to keep your readers interested.
| Reviewed By: Laser Crusader On: May 02, 2005 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I get the feeling that you do not like either Shinji or Misato. From what I have read so far in your Terminator Fanfiction you got Misato fired from being a Guardian and commented several times that she is drunk. In this fanfiction you took away her ability to Drink beer. In the last chapter of your Terminator Fanfiction Shinji didn't do so much except have a near death experience. In the last chapter of this fanfiction he wasn't even in it. He was mentioned a couple of times but he didn't partipate in anything. Also you mentioned the possibiltity that Rei and Asuka would be Sith or Jedi so where does that leave Shinji. Do you think he is unworthy to be either Jedi or Sith. I mean he is a natural Evangelion Pilot so I can only assume he would be a natural Jedi or Sith. I mean he is not the weakling every believes him to be. What exactly do you have against these two characters? Please don't take forever because it is trully evil to keep your fans waiting for an update.
| Reviewed By: Kaze Kami On: February 05, 2005 17:44 CST
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Nice story and very interesting usage of the Imperial Remnant. I kinda wish it used the New Republic, but its your story. Have fun with it.
| Reviewed By: GLH On: December 03, 2004 03:35 CST
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Steve has a webpage?
| Reviewed By: safayi On: December 01, 2004 00:08 CST
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hey its me vader4ever im just not signed-in....but anyways my comment is this-----> LOSER, i already read this on your web page. i was so happy that you had up-dated. that was such a let down. i still love you though.......and please oh please update again!!!!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Supreme Guyver On: August 07, 2004 17:53 CDT
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can't wait 'til this story's updated & in chapter 10 you wrote that the precision rifle Rei tried was for targets 1-45 meters away, well a meter is only 3.28 feet
| Reviewed By: Sikorsky On: August 05, 2004 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm, I really like this one. The water sport fetish. uh, wildly unnecessary to show how brazen Shinji has become and kinda turns me off to him. However I'd still like to see him undergo training as a jedi. That would be neato. Keep it up. The story really isn't even that intertwined with the core of Evangelion at all anymore, but what the hell it's a fan fiction so nobody should give a damn. Keep up the good work. PS. Kill hikari, jazz her death up a bit.
| Reviewed By: Chaos Damn It [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 17:12 CDT
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Ho-ly shit. Damn man, this is absolutely, positivly AWESOME. This is one of the few stories that I have read as of late that is capable of making me confused, happy, angered, anxious, saddened, and even GIDDY!!! I AM GIDDY RIGHT NOW!!! WHEN OH WHEN WILL THERE BE MORE!?!? Please make it soon! This story is most certianly worth waiting through any long update times, I just hope that I won't have to wait too long. Continue with the excellence, because that is all that this story has to offer: excellence.
| Title: DAMN!!!
Reviewed By: Damien700 On: May 09, 2004 19:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so cool so far, only one thing can ruin it for me, and that being a Shinji/Rei pairing... for some reason i just dont like Rei that much... ohh well... Shinji/Asuka all the way!
| Reviewed By: ChinaBoy08 On: April 10, 2004 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well done this fic is really good in writing and thinking, and it was really fun reading this so plz don't let me down by not getting the next chapter up soon
| Title: Yeah
Reviewed By: Chaos Damn It [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 18:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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what he said ^_^
| Reviewed By: Lord Shinji On: March 04, 2004 03:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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