| "CHANGING DARKNESS" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kaze Kami On: February 05, 2005 17:44 CST
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Nice story and very interesting usage of the Imperial Remnant. I kinda wish it used the New Republic, but its your story. Have fun with it.
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Reviewed By: GLH On: December 03, 2004 03:35 CST
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Steve has a webpage?
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Reviewed By: safayi On: December 01, 2004 00:08 CST
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hey its me vader4ever im just not signed-in....but anyways my comment is this-----> LOSER, i already read this on your web page. i was so happy that you had up-dated. that was such a let down. i still love you though.......and please oh please update again!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Supreme Guyver On: August 07, 2004 17:53 CDT
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can't wait 'til this story's updated & in chapter 10 you wrote that the precision rifle Rei tried was for targets 1-45 meters away, well a meter is only 3.28 feet
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Reviewed By: Sikorsky On: August 05, 2004 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm, I really like this one. The water sport fetish. uh, wildly unnecessary to show how brazen Shinji has become and kinda turns me off to him. However I'd still like to see him undergo training as a jedi. That would be neato. Keep it up. The story really isn't even that intertwined with the core of Evangelion at all anymore, but what the hell it's a fan fiction so nobody should give a damn. Keep up the good work. PS. Kill hikari, jazz her death up a bit.
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Reviewed By: Chaos Damn It [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 17:12 CDT
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Ho-ly shit. Damn man, this is absolutely, positivly AWESOME. This is one of the few stories that I have read as of late that is capable of making me confused, happy, angered, anxious, saddened, and even GIDDY!!! I AM GIDDY RIGHT NOW!!! WHEN OH WHEN WILL THERE BE MORE!?!? Please make it soon! This story is most certianly worth waiting through any long update times, I just hope that I won't have to wait too long. Continue with the excellence, because that is all that this story has to offer: excellence.
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Title: DAMN!!!
Reviewed By: Damien700 On: May 09, 2004 19:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so cool so far, only one thing can ruin it for me, and that being a Shinji/Rei pairing... for some reason i just dont like Rei that much... ohh well... Shinji/Asuka all the way!
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Reviewed By: ChinaBoy08 On: April 10, 2004 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well done this fic is really good in writing and thinking, and it was really fun reading this so plz don't let me down by not getting the next chapter up soon
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Title: Yeah
Reviewed By: Chaos Damn It [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 18:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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what he said ^_^
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Reviewed By: Lord Shinji On: March 04, 2004 03:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE
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Reviewed By: Fear Me On: January 22, 2004 09:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is an awesome story man. keep it up
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Reviewed By: hlpo On: January 21, 2004 00:25 CST
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cool story.
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Reviewed By: emt10 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2004 20:57 CST
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This is really good. It should be interesting to see how Asuka and shinji get along, as well as how Misato the Sith get along. I was also wondering if the sith would ever go any farther than thinking "I wouldn't mind a night with her,", "her" being misato. Thats all for now! emt10
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Reviewed By: Et On: January 16, 2004 19:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the coolest fucking Eva/Starwars fic ever!
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Reviewed By: Mike Manazure [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2004 13:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good fic, having a good OC, no OOC at all (Exelent!) and total Ikari bashing stuff (Both of them, the Bakemono-father and the Baka-son). Your spelling lacks a bit (did you have a beta reader? nether do I), and it took some of the enjoyment away. The lemony scene between a prostitute and Shinji is good, realistic and somewhat familiar *blush*
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