| "Dream Lover" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Judin On: April 20, 2004 14:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story's grammar and punctuation is like water in the dessert; nearly nonexistent! I like the plot and the lemon is damn hot, and if you could only fix the punctuatuion and maybe get some space instead of writing it all in one big bulk, this story would be a ten in my book. Keep trying, and I would like to see more of this; a sequel perhaps?
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Reviewed By: Tree Frog101 On: April 03, 2004 22:20 CST
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Has anyone heard of, maybe, PUNCTUATION?! And maybe a paragraph every now and then? It's an alright plot, but the grammar is horrible as well. Try asking someone to beta-read before you post, it'll help.
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Reviewed By: Reis love [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2004 17:38 CST
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Reviewed By: Reis love [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2004 17:38 CST
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lol...cu-...no its bea-...well i dont know what to call it but i liked it.^_^
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Reviewed By: ~*Salima*~ On: January 27, 2004 17:56 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good, good you should definatly contniue it....just pleeeaaaase don't kill anyone in it.
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Reviewed By: Pyro Starr* On: January 25, 2004 21:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should totally continue it! I loved it throughly!
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Reviewed By: Silver Kitsune* On: September 20, 2003 20:23 CDT
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Sugoi !! |
