| "Usagi's the Enemy???" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: great fun!
Reviewed By: SailorIda [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2003 08:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you could have paid a little more attention to the writing style in some places and in others I thought it was great! You really get on with the story rather than losing yourself in unneccessary detail. I certainly like the story and would like to read more of it. So keep it up! PS: Because our writing styles are so different I would really appreciate it if you read mine and tell me honestly what you think! ;)
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Title: I love it
Reviewed By: TRUSTcompanyLinkinPark_FanGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2003 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should really continue I am patiently awaiting the next chapter and upcoming ones.So I can't wait to read them please update soon Thank you Ciao! |
Reviewed By: Kobayashi On: September 19, 2003 11:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Noooooooooooo!! You need to write more!! I demand it!! Write more, please!! *flail* That drew me in so quickly, I NEED to read more of it!! XD Hurry up! |
Title: I love it!
Reviewed By: Excited Reader On: September 18, 2003 05:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue I want to read more..I like it you did well on the two chapters please update soon..I would like to now what happens next till then I'll be waiting patiently. |
