| "The Hot Spring" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Inukag_obsession [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 12:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hott! I really liked it.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Kagome69 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 12:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wow this was great. You have talent in writing this. you made me finger myself so much, and now there is cum everywhere on the seat. I even got and orgasm!!! keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Hino Mitsukiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2004 15:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm, not as original.. but good fic anyway. Catches the.. attention.. ^_- Could have made a bit of a plot, but still pretty good, like Lady Fang said, a bit rushed. A sequel would be perfect, maybe about their pup, or a Sango/Miroku, it's your choice. But keep on writing, ^_^
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Reviewed By: Relix On: November 10, 2003 15:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not the most original but still awesome.
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Title: WOOOOW!!!!
Reviewed By: HAP [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2003 15:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holy shit that was amazing, that was a great story i loved it so much!!
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Reviewed By: Lady Fang On: October 14, 2003 14:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good. A bit rushed but Good. Write another one.
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Title: Whoa
Reviewed By: Riomi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2003 11:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this was very interesting...i really enjoyed it. May i ask how long you have been writing because this was very...hmmm eye-catching...lol
Please write some more stories cause you definetly have the talent.
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