| "An Absence of Light" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: ~*~ On: July 08, 2005 11:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the chapters for this story just keep getting better and better! i swear, when i read this, i'm reading the screneplay for the next digimon season (if only, right?). i love the way you write, and your descriptions of what's happening in the human and digi verses right now are better than any of the seasons so far(scept maybe 2nd season *loved daisuke*). ^ ^- please keep updating this story, you make my day with it.
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Reviewed By: Alan Wilkinson On: July 08, 2005 05:01 CDT
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Great stuff. One question while I think about it: What level is Golden Saint Galgomon? And if Black MegaloGrowmon is that strong, I'm looking forward to seeing what Black Megidramon can do. Of course, whether or not he's contolllable is another matter entirely.
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Reviewed By: Akari and Kurai [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 16:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!! I luffles this story so friggin much! ^-^ Please update soon! Shuichon is so adorable! *snuggles* Shui-chan plushie* She is the main character of this story, right? I hope something awsome happens soon! ^-^ As long as Ryo doesn't do that to her, then I'm fine! Go Shui-chan, pepper and Lopmon~! Defeat the evil Roy's evil plan!
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Reviewed By: ~Akari~ On: January 14, 2005 20:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS SSSSSSSS this chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *gushes* So gooooood! B-but what will happen to Shuichon-chan? ;_; what is that evil person-thingy gonna do to her?!?! He better not hurt her! *bares teeth* Or else I'll have to kill 'im! *angry glare* For some reason whenever Ryo says Shuichon-chan's name, he makes me think that he's gonna do something BAD to her that should be illegal! *twtchey eye* Ryo better not do what I am thinking about....heehee...I loves your story so much though~! please update soon! ^-^
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Reviewed By: shadowblack [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 03:54 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story so far. I really like it (and the two couples too, especially Alice/Takato). About the Hybrids - personally I get the feeling that the people, who made season 4, forgot about the levels of the digimon, which is why all the good guys are (supposedly) on the same level and why in some cases defeating a Champion was harder than defeating an Ultimate. However I have to disagree with your classification of the hybrids (although probably no one will agree with me). It should be like this: Rookie - Flamon & Strabimon Armor/Champion - Human/Beast - Agunimon & Lobomon / Burning Greymon & Kendo Garurumon Human and Beast Spirits can be considered two different Armor or Champion levels, but in any case slide digivolution only proves my idea. Just because Beast Spirits are supposed to be stronger than the Human Spirits doesn't mean they should be on a different level. After all, Magnamon is definitely stronger than Flamedramon, but they are still on the same level - Armor. Personally I think Golden Armor should be a separate level from Armor, but it seems the makers of Digimon didn't think so. Ultimate - Double/Fusion - Aldamon & Beowulfmon Mega - Unified - Emperor Greymon & Magna Garurumon Omnimon - Susanoomon Don't bother telling me that Emperor Greymon & Magna Garurumon's power comes from 5 Mega digimon each and they should be more powerful than a Mega. While that is probably true it is impossible to tell just how powerful the Ancient digimon really |
Reviewed By: Akari! On: October 06, 2004 16:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Akari: Nya~! Thankyou for replying in the story!! ^-^ A kirin is a male and female unicorn fused togeather. The chinese 'Ki' meaning meaning female unicorn and 'rien' meaning male unicorn. I knew about the kitsune magic already though...'Ne ways, great story!! Continue soon!!
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Title: I know again!
Reviewed By: Akari and Kurai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 12:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The leaves are important because when ever she uses an atack for some reasom there's always leaves (right?) I'm not quite sure about the dragon one, but maybe it's because since the one dude who was killed was a dragon all the dragon digimon are trying to find the one responsibal in the real world??? I know stupid guess, but... *shrugs*.
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Title: I know I know I know!!!!
Reviewed By: Akari and Kurai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 18:29 CDT
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I know what the creature of the center is!!!! It's the Kirin!!! ^_^ I have know idea who the hell he is as a digimon, but i know he/she's a kirin!!! I learned that from PetShop of Horrors!!! *cuddles her collection of PSoH manga and feels smart* Ja! For now, and by the way I like the story so far!
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Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: December 04, 2003 13:52 CST
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The Holy Dragon is still alive but the other Holy Beasts sensed that Holy Dragon is dead? Then who is the fake Holy Beast? So Milliunmon posseed Ryo's body and since they are linked after all. This fic is confusing and nothing is as it should. So Pepper isn't going to be Jenya's sister's digimon huh and who will Pepper become a Tamer with?
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Title: the fallen knight digimon
Reviewed By: ShadowGallantmon On: November 20, 2003 07:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just giving you some insentive(sp?)
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Title: the fallen knight digimon
Reviewed By: ShadowGallantmon On: November 20, 2003 06:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic post more soon
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Title: the fallen knight digimon
Reviewed By: ShadowGallantmon On: November 20, 2003 06:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic post more soon
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Title: the fallen knight digimon
Reviewed By: ShadowGallantmon On: November 20, 2003 06:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic post more soon
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Title: the fallen knight digimon
Reviewed By: ShadowGallantmon On: October 29, 2003 07:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
post more soon
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