| "Catching Rain" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: redbirdo27 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2005 19:26 CST
Comment/Review:
it was really good! ^_^ I just thought of an idea! a new rain dance: SEX! dun duhn dunnn!!!! Ha ha....
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Title: Well, I thought it was good.
Reviewed By: Ami-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 15:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It seems a couple of people didn't much like your fanfic. I for one, thought it was very good. Me, I like all of those 'corny' things. I didn't really think it was immature or anything. I mean, if this is your forst one of these, it was just wonderful. Keep up your good work. It was different than most lemons, to say for sure, but that'snot a bad thing. You also got me thinking about it, which I also thought was good. Overall, I liked it. Sure, there's some room for improvement, but can't you say that about any fan fiction? Well, thank you for writing it, and I'm looking forward for more of your lemons and stories. -Ami-Chan ^_^
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Reviewed By: Clair On: February 03, 2004 14:49 CST
Comment/Review:
It was good but it left. Me thinking...
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Title: catching rain
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2003 01:47 CST
Comment/Review:
NICE:D
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Reviewed By: Nitchy On: November 17, 2003 19:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Rather rushed, don't you believe? I still enjoyed it, though the part about the 'urges' and such was a bit corny, as was stated already. Perhaps you can fix up your writing and make it slightly more mature. Other than that, it was nice for your first one!
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Reviewed By: InuChobitfan On: October 11, 2003 00:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!!! for You
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Reviewed By: tt43 On: October 10, 2003 22:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're not writing more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?????????????
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Reviewed By: Sakura Kotori On: October 10, 2003 00:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The fic was very good up til the part when you said they both had urges to do something unusual that night. That seemed kinda corny to me. But overall it was very good. You have the potental to write some very good non-lemon Kenshin stories. ~Sakura Kotori
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Reviewed By: mr.?? On: September 21, 2003 07:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERY GOOOD |
