| "To Bind a Soul" Reviews/Comments [ 153 ] |
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Reviewed By: Silvering [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 19:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Nice cliffy, there--not too evil. ~_^ Pretty engaging story. Style seemed a bit shallow to me; a bit more character development would be nice, maybe a tighter focus on just a few characters; a bit more description. Something I was curious about- there's a description of Kagome's ears as being white (or gray, I honestly can't remember atm) that threw me off for a bit thinking about how odd that would look with her black hair. But hey, if that's the way you want it, I'm not complaining! :) Last quibble, since I'll give you creative license with hanyou biology and the immediate embryo heartbeats. ;) "Opps" is not a word, as far as I know. Should be spelled "oops" for the long-"o" sound. More "o"s can be added for feeling, but you need at least two, not just one. "Opps" has the same short-"o" sound as "opposite." It was bugging me. Sorry. ;) Have a good time at your new home! :)
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Reviewed By: darkempereror [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 05:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*moans*What a time for you to move to Japan and have no internet. You just needed to leave us with a cliffhanger eh? No Sesshomru can't come and fight or start a conversation, he's just there when you decide to end the fic. Update please!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Fear_of_Real_Life [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 00:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i truely wish you would finish this or let someone else finish it if you dont want to but its not fair to leave such a great story unfinished like this
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Reviewed By: Golden Foxfyre On: May 13, 2004 16:12 CDT
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This is a very good story, but I'm left hanging here. I've noticed that's its been a while since you updated, so if the next chapter is ready could you put it up soon? Thanks!
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Reviewed By: firelord [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 01:45 CST
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for all those who wish to read the completed version go to ff.net you can find it there under the same tittle
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Reviewed By: A_river On: March 07, 2004 13:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this story!!!!!! You so gotta update on it. Keep up the excellent work.
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Title: Great story
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2004 14:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Update soon. Love to know what Sesshoumaru wants with Inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: InuGirlTeen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2004 20:14 CST
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UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!! *breathe* !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: link2910 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2004 00:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
err melphina the babys are part demon, maybe they develop early :)
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Reviewed By: firelord [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2004 23:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update so i can at least know that you have not abandend this fic.
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Title: Heartbeats this early?
Reviewed By: Melphina_xgp [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2004 16:25 CST
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In the 33rd chapter, you talked about how Shippou could already hear the babies heartbeats like two days after Kagome and Inuyasha...well anyway Shippou could hear the heartbeats but babies don't develop hearts until a few weeks or something until their born, right?
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Reviewed By: I_LOVE_LOVE_THIS_FANFIC!!!! On: February 10, 2004 19:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
if you want to read Fire Godesses fanfic go to http://www.kokololio.com/guiltypleasures/archive/fire-goddess/tobindasoul/
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Reviewed By: TwilightDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2004 22:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an EXCELLENT fic! I find this storyline to be better than the anime itself! Hope you're gonna update soon!
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Reviewed By: laura conner On: January 29, 2004 01:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you need to finish the god damn story!
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Reviewed By: lover of all anime On: January 27, 2004 21:26 CST
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this is a great story you are a very good auther so please update this wonderful story
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