Reviewed By: super saiyan 4 chichi On: November 15, 2004 22:10 CST Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review: loved the fic but why didn't you make the lemon well...more lemonly but besides that i luved the part where goku and vehitagitta ( however you spell that name)fought and goku turned SS5 great for him i luved it...vegetas brother was a asshole. i wish you put more detail in the fight but that okay because i still luved the fic also the enerx thing they most DEFINATELY didn't need lol...good fic though ^-^
Reviewed By: NSBVEGE On: September 19, 2003 11:05 CDT Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: LOVED IT BUT WHY B-V LEMON SO SHORT! AND G-CC LONGER I SEE FAVORITISIM LOL! ANYWHOO I ENJOYED IT LOTS DONT I WISH TO HAVE A HORNY SAIYAN BELLOW A FULL MOON AND HEY UM WHY THE ENERX THING THEY REALLY DONT NEED IT LOL!
LATER CONTUNE UR WRITING!
