| "The Darkness Will Live On" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2009 13:33 CDT
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I got down to where the text started changing color and stopped reading. I simply could NOT read those colors you had picked for text. Cyan, Light yellow, BRIGHT green, none of those are good colors to be putting on a white background for the purpose of making someone read them. For one thing its near impossible to do so. For another its just bad web design standard to do so. so, till it changes, I'll pass on this fic. JA!
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Reviewed By: lunachan579 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2003 20:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmm Duo has daughters....that's new and very cool. it was kinda hard to read tho` but hey I got used to it after a while! Very good job please write more!!!
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Title: Evil imp...
Reviewed By: Shadow_Kat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2003 18:39 CST
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I tell you it's just evil the way you just stopped like that. I want to read more and there is nothing to read except a blackmail! I'm telling my mommy and she's gonna yell at you! Well needless to say I loved what you have so far and I look forward to reading more *in the near future*. I'm stuck in China for the next year and I love to read well written fics when my computer actually works...so that means that you have to continue writing to give me something to do during all the damn snowstorms! :P I'll check back later!
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Reviewed By: Binx On: December 01, 2003 13:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good. I never would have thought to put Duo with kids. I love Katy and Ruffy's personalities as well. all in all I'm impressed.
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Title: I love this...
Reviewed By: Freak_on_a_Leash [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2003 14:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job..this may sound corny but its true I love this..you did a great job.I shall need my patience to wait for chapters so..*grabs a box,unlocks it,unchains it,and opens it*..here we go..I keep it for special things and stuff..so I need it for this and shall await patiently the next chapter so Good luck!
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Reviewed By: Mashiro_Karasu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2003 23:32 CDT
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doing good with this story...i liek the thing with the girls eyes...will be interesting to see how Duo explains that...hhmmm..maybe go into a bit more detail about things? like why the girls got kicked out..you started to touch on that but it never said why..btw need a beta raeder? I would be glad to
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Title: Not Bad
Reviewed By: Surtgr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2003 21:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the idea of Duo\\\'s Children but then I like it when ANY of the pilots have children... Not bad though you could clean up that WEIRD paragraph set but other then that It seems like a good story, Please continue I would like to see what happens. ... (Side) ... And I LOVE the disclaimer :) the low spelling and grammer is for that paragraph set
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Reviewed By: lissabeth [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2003 15:20 CDT
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i really like this story. i can't wait to read more. |
