| "Red Rain" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: KoolNeko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2003 16:17 CST
Comment/Review:
I Hate You how long does it take to write another chapter I gave you enough time to I'm getting inpatient PLEASE write another chapter so I don't go CRAZY oh yay I'm already CRAZY.BYE *_* '_'
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Reviewed By: KoolNeko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2003 00:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey Kria I just saw you 10/30/03 which is just an hour ago so hi again look I know you've been working on another chapter but can you hurry it up oh well atleast I know what it's about so hah to the people who don't know J...I mean Kria personally (sympathy face) well I'll see you tomarow when we go Trick or treating I ca't wait to see your costume wait i all ready have oh well I havent seen it on you yet Oh for the people who don't Know who I'm going as I'm going as Kagome that's right Kagome and there isn't anything you can do to stop me so ha ha a ha ha.Bye see you tomarow night. #_#
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Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2003 21:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eee! GOOD JOB!!!!!!! i LOVED it! unfortunately, i don't know what pairings i want, but this is the like first story i don't feel sorry for inuyasha! he deserves it! and yes......die kikyo die! *laughs likemaniac as Zim drags her away* *Lani bonks Zim* Damn alien! where was i? oh yea! eee! i cant wait for the next chappie! and i dont mind short chapters at all! it just leaves me thirsy for more! plz update asap!!!!! Hugs hugs hugs, chocolate chocolate chocolate!!!! -Lani
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Title: Hi!!!Its me Kria Devils!!!
Reviewed By: Kria Devils [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2003 20:43 CDT
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Hi!!Thax for reveiwing!!Oh KoolNeko,you spelt Julayne wrong!!Oh ya I know that I have bad grammer and spelling!!And yes I'm making another chapter,but I got grounded from the computer!!DAMN TEACHERS!!! BYE(^_^)
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Reviewed By: the quiet one [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2003 09:48 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was pretty good. There were a ton of grammatical errors but that's o.k. You need to write more. I'll be waiting...
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Reviewed By: waterrain [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2003 06:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please more chapters oh please more chapters.
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Reviewed By: waterrain [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2003 16:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story+ it has sad chapters it makes me cry+ I love your chapters=please more chapters.
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Reviewed By: KoolNeko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2003 01:11 CDT
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Have you made another chapter yet Kria at school I cant ask you because I'm covered in work I try to ask but it's hard because we move on to another subject before I can even talk to you?! so make another chapter Or else Your Bakuru, Oh ya I forgot to tell If you don't I will send Your sister Julean after you.
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Title: please update soon
Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2003 22:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story please update soon..............please please please please update soon
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Reviewed By: waterrain [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2003 18:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are evil leaveing a ciff and good chapter and now I can not sleep because of the ciff please more chapters.
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Reviewed By: rAiNwAtEr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2003 01:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think your story is off to a good start, when will you have the next chapter out. Oh and by the way, stop being so hard on your self,I am very glad that you asked me to read your story. I would read any ones story if they asked me to.=p As far as when will I update my story, I don't know. I have the next chapter writen but it wont gone on here. See I wrote my fanfic on fanfiction.net and decided to post it on here, now I am starting to think it wasn't a good idea, it seems people don't like it but you and one other person, oh well who cares as long as I have one reader then I will still write my fic, thank you for reviewing and good luck with your fanfic, keep in touch =p |
Reviewed By: KoolNeko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2003 23:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Make Another chapter If you dont I know were you live really I do And I know your real name and your sister because Kria I am your best friend! |
Reviewed By: KoolNeko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2003 23:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!!!! COOL!!! WRITE MORE!!! NOW!! OR ELSE!!
Looks at claws!! DUNDUNDUNDUH! |
Reviewed By: Riley Maxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2003 19:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it, write more and thanks for the review on my story.
*Riley |
