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Reviewed By: RBM On: January 12, 2004 20:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love you in japanese in ai shiteru. fyi. great job. i hope you write more.
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Reviewed By: SailorNeptune [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2004 14:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! I really like the plot of it. I like the connections of Kagome and Sesshomaru. Keep writing!!
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Reviewed By: ? On: January 12, 2004 11:12 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just so you know, not only did Striking Falcon reveiw your work, she recomened on tn Unexpected Allies 3.
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Reviewed By: ? On: January 12, 2004 11:12 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just so you know, not only did Striking Falcon reveiw your work, she recomened on tn Unexpected Allies 3.
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Reviewed By: Striking Falcon (not signed in) On: January 08, 2004 22:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't need a thing dear, especially a bobble head of Sesshoumaru. He's here right now, dictating how the next chapter of 'To Bear' should go and trying to harrass my lemon writer into doing what he wants. Arrogant...anyway, I'm so sorry about catching up to you so late. I've been super busy. The ending was so sweet...but now I'm curious as to what they'll do about the Shikon. But I'm naturally nosey that way. Great story, and (surprise) you're one of the authors that started me into fanfiction! So it's me over here going "Oh my God, she responded!" {::insert lots of happy dancing here::}
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Title: I loved it!
Reviewed By: Fluffys mate [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2003 17:21 CST
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i really loved this story! it was soo sweet and i got really into it...cheers to u! And as much as *I* want sesshomaru, this story turned out great with kagome...thanks for writing it!
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Reviewed By: Cymarel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2003 21:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
and a sequel would be verily much appreciated! really! its all fabbity fab fab! (i wouldnt normally use that phrase but I jsut finished reading eth 4th georgia nicholson series... eheh! funny...)
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Title: 0.o! Too Good!
Reviewed By: Cymarel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2003 21:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooo!!! I just wanted to say that I loved this story!!!I thought it was totally original with the dreams and that was so great! and of course being a Sesshoumaru and Kagome didnt hurt! thats my favorite anyways! thank you! gomen! (((and I didnt notice spelling or grammar mistakes but I really wasnt paying that much attention to that...))) just wanted to say I loved your story! it is sooooo my favorite! wish it was possible to give you over a ten cuz yorus deserves WAY more! thank you again! gomen! -Cymarel
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Reviewed By: HawkBlade [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2003 22:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I loved it! Finally, I'm getting un-grounded so I could read it. No, you didn't get me grounded. *luckily* Lol! Seriously, you did an awesome, fantastic, cool, great(where's a thesurus when ya finally need one?), wonderful job!!!!
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Reviewed By: lil_sesshi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2003 23:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
are you going to write more, if not then you should do a sequence...it was really good.
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Title: brittany
Reviewed By: Nagasaki [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2003 09:07 CST
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this was a great story.
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Reviewed By: Cresent moon 22000 On: October 29, 2003 16:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is really gooooooood
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Reviewed By: Amreld On: October 27, 2003 15:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAHOO! That story rocked!! ^_^ That was like, totally radical dude! ^-~ Ahem, sorry about that. Well! I loved this story so much and it was soooo damn funny I though I was going to give myself a hernia laughing! Especially the part whe Kagome was teasing Sesshoumaru about him being in heat. *snicker* Poor Sesshy. Loved it! I'll most likely find and read another one of your stories! ^-^ Keep writing! Amreld the sky elf
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Reviewed By: efreet [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 16:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are correct about "wo ai ni" it is in fact chinese and means "I love you." I don't think it is really important that the language is not correct, only that the message is there, besides large portions of writen and spoken Japanese have their ancestral roots in Chinese so technically it is not incorrect to use it. Don't feel bad, it's a mistake anyone could make. I really enjoyed this story, I especially liked the Koga bashing...I admit I enjoy seeing him put in his place. Keep them coming.
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: October 24, 2003 03:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed reading this story immensely. The way you had Sessh and Kagome meet was very original. My one complaint is that it was too short. Too many questions were left unanswered. I hope you were serious about doing a sequel.
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