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Reviewed By: ScottishFae [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 01:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your take on this fic, the fact that Sess & Kagome met in their dreams while they were young was very original and just a great idea! I really wish you would continue on with this story and make a sequel... there is just so much left open, will the other taiyouki except kagome as sess' mate, what will happen as kagome continues to collect the shards, how will the defeat naraku, even going into will kag & sess produce a heir & etc...you so have to continue if you can!! This was written very well and I just can't think of how to compliment you on an excellent fic w/o falling short of what i should be saying, I would definetly rank your fic up there, in my opinion, with some of the better ones. Great Job!!!
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Title: Bombay fic!
Reviewed By: Mistress Fluffy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2003 22:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this. It was realyl different and original. Are you going to do a sequel? I would think it would be cool. Loved it and it's shortness. I can stand long fics but not whenI have to go to sleep in liek five minutes and still have like three to ten chaps to go. Oh and what lanugage does 'wo ai ni' comes from? I want to know. Kay Ja matte ne. Just e-mail me at sesshoufan@yahoo.com!
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Reviewed By: darkangelkitty On: October 23, 2003 22:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
darkangelkitty 0ops ^_^'
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Title: you rock
Reviewed By: drakangelkitty On: October 23, 2003 22:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic was great i loved it ..write some fics too but mine are never this good ....^_^
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Reviewed By: Blue Saiyan Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2003 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was terrific! But, is this the end? It kinda sounds like this was the last chapter. TTFN!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2003 12:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way you characterized Sess in this fic, very cool.
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Reviewed By: Sesshyangel On: October 17, 2003 14:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have got to write a better summary! IT does not do this fic justice! It does not distinguish this fic from other "I've been dreaming of a white-haired Sesshoumaru" fics. Really, if I hadn't been bored I wouldn't have bothered! Now I'm glad that I did, cuz I love how the fic starts with them as children. She has known him before he could truly solidify that wall around him.
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Reviewed By: DragonesstheKnight On: October 15, 2003 20:50 CDT
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I love your story! The descriptions are amazing.I am totally jealous of Sesshoumaru's home.It sounds like a beautiful place to live in. I can't wait to see how the next chapter goes.
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Reviewed By: Twomewtwo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 20:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is in every way the best story I've read thus far! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: XxX Demon Child XxX On: October 15, 2003 20:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LUV YOUR STORY ITS SOOOO GOOD UPDATE SOON
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Reviewed By: YASMIN On: October 15, 2003 09:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so that's it ? you ended the story ? O love it ! I think you are Unique cuz no one I mean no had thought of the idea of using dreams and the whole soulmate thing. I love it ! you know i do belove that everyone has a soulmate. but anyways mad props on the story .
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Reviewed By: Blue Saiyan Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 08:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
secret place , That is a different way of putting it. That doesn't sound so harsh. Now that they have found each other, it will be interesting to see what path you take us on regarding the future chapters. Update soon, TTFN!
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Title: Chimera: Chapter 3 Reimates
Reviewed By: Water Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 07:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was pretty good. I can't wait to read the next. Phoenix
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Reviewed By: TriAnime [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 07:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry! I was hyper when i wrote my last review, so I had no control over wat I did. I'm terribly sorry. Good chapter! Keep writing.
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Title: Chapater3
Reviewed By: Aira^o^ On: October 15, 2003 03:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god! this is good! you finally update! . . :: do a victory dance :: . . I do love all of your Sess/Kagome fic! They are great! . . Love Chances on ff.net too! . . :: You are the author right? :: . . . Well so far this is my fav! . . . . One question though.. "Wo ai ni" is chinese right? "Aishiteru" is Japanese for I love you, I was just a little confuse on the language change that all ^_^;;;
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