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Title: 0.o! Too Good!
Reviewed By: Cymarel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2003 21:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooo!!! I just wanted to say that I loved this story!!!I thought it was totally original with the dreams and that was so great! and of course being a Sesshoumaru and Kagome didnt hurt! thats my favorite anyways! thank you! gomen! (((and I didnt notice spelling or grammar mistakes but I really wasnt paying that much attention to that...))) just wanted to say I loved your story! it is sooooo my favorite! wish it was possible to give you over a ten cuz yorus deserves WAY more! thank you again! gomen! -Cymarel
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Reviewed By: HawkBlade [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2003 22:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I loved it! Finally, I'm getting un-grounded so I could read it. No, you didn't get me grounded. *luckily* Lol! Seriously, you did an awesome, fantastic, cool, great(where's a thesurus when ya finally need one?), wonderful job!!!!
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Reviewed By: lil_sesshi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2003 23:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
are you going to write more, if not then you should do a sequence...it was really good.
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Title: brittany
Reviewed By: Nagasaki [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2003 09:07 CST
Comment/Review:
this was a great story.
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Reviewed By: Cresent moon 22000 On: October 29, 2003 16:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is really gooooooood
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Reviewed By: Amreld On: October 27, 2003 15:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAHOO! That story rocked!! ^_^ That was like, totally radical dude! ^-~ Ahem, sorry about that. Well! I loved this story so much and it was soooo damn funny I though I was going to give myself a hernia laughing! Especially the part whe Kagome was teasing Sesshoumaru about him being in heat. *snicker* Poor Sesshy. Loved it! I'll most likely find and read another one of your stories! ^-^ Keep writing! Amreld the sky elf
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Reviewed By: efreet [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 16:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are correct about "wo ai ni" it is in fact chinese and means "I love you." I don't think it is really important that the language is not correct, only that the message is there, besides large portions of writen and spoken Japanese have their ancestral roots in Chinese so technically it is not incorrect to use it. Don't feel bad, it's a mistake anyone could make. I really enjoyed this story, I especially liked the Koga bashing...I admit I enjoy seeing him put in his place. Keep them coming.
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: October 24, 2003 03:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed reading this story immensely. The way you had Sessh and Kagome meet was very original. My one complaint is that it was too short. Too many questions were left unanswered. I hope you were serious about doing a sequel.
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Reviewed By: ScottishFae [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 01:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your take on this fic, the fact that Sess & Kagome met in their dreams while they were young was very original and just a great idea! I really wish you would continue on with this story and make a sequel... there is just so much left open, will the other taiyouki except kagome as sess' mate, what will happen as kagome continues to collect the shards, how will the defeat naraku, even going into will kag & sess produce a heir & etc...you so have to continue if you can!! This was written very well and I just can't think of how to compliment you on an excellent fic w/o falling short of what i should be saying, I would definetly rank your fic up there, in my opinion, with some of the better ones. Great Job!!!
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Title: Bombay fic!
Reviewed By: Mistress Fluffy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2003 22:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this. It was realyl different and original. Are you going to do a sequel? I would think it would be cool. Loved it and it's shortness. I can stand long fics but not whenI have to go to sleep in liek five minutes and still have like three to ten chaps to go. Oh and what lanugage does 'wo ai ni' comes from? I want to know. Kay Ja matte ne. Just e-mail me at sesshoufan@yahoo.com!
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Reviewed By: darkangelkitty On: October 23, 2003 22:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
darkangelkitty 0ops ^_^'
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Title: you rock
Reviewed By: drakangelkitty On: October 23, 2003 22:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic was great i loved it ..write some fics too but mine are never this good ....^_^
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Reviewed By: Blue Saiyan Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2003 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was terrific! But, is this the end? It kinda sounds like this was the last chapter. TTFN!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2003 12:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way you characterized Sess in this fic, very cool.
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Reviewed By: Sesshyangel On: October 17, 2003 14:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have got to write a better summary! IT does not do this fic justice! It does not distinguish this fic from other "I've been dreaming of a white-haired Sesshoumaru" fics. Really, if I hadn't been bored I wouldn't have bothered! Now I'm glad that I did, cuz I love how the fic starts with them as children. She has known him before he could truly solidify that wall around him.
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