| "Ripples" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Title: Ripples
Reviewed By: Unseen Watcher On: October 27, 2003 18:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wheee!! That was great! Your grammar has improved too! Thank you for sharing it with others.
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Reviewed By: jschu25 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2003 21:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi Arella, I so love this story. I had to read it in one shot, sorry I didn't take the time to review each chapter, was too excited to read the next one. I'm glad to know the 80's haven't died. What was with the song titles? I almost laugh myself silly w/ the Quite Riot chapter. I've so been there. I look forward to reading more. Please send updates to email address jschumaker@chartermi.com. Thanks, jschu25
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Reviewed By: Youkai_Hime [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2003 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! [please post next one real soon?] well anyway let's get on with the Kouga verses Sess-kun and Kagome! cant wait!
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Reviewed By: Miyumi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2003 18:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! I luved this chappie!!! Pleaze update soon this is the BOMB!!!! Can't wait to read about the WEDDING *bells ringing* hehe!!! Can't Wait!! ~Miyumi~
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Title: Ripples and Chimera
Reviewed By: Unseen Watcher On: October 20, 2003 19:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm back! I'm very flattered that I'm your first reviewer. I've never had that distinction before. I love your writing and ideas. Only some slight errors in word arrangement. Love the stories, LOTS!! ^_~
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Reviewed By: brittany On: October 16, 2003 18:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
this a great story so far. please email me when you update. i would be very greatful. my emial address is brittanybatten@sbcglobal.net. thank you. again great story so far.
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Reviewed By: mooneyoukai On: October 15, 2003 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful and heart moving story that really gives you an indepth feeling of what the characters are going through and you manage to draw a person into to a story and leave them begging for more one of the Best pieces i have read hope you write books someday because right now it looks like you have great promise
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Title: Yip!!!
Reviewed By: Sunstar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 01:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!!!*excited Yip* That was absolutely funny with Tail!!!Keep up the good work! I love this keep up the good work!!!Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Tiana On: October 01, 2003 03:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow this is awsome please update soooooooooooon
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Title: Ripples
Reviewed By: Unseen Watcher On: September 29, 2003 19:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
When you said he was a grown dog I thought that you meant he went into full dog state. I wondered how he could fit into the house (especially considering the fact that in 500 years he's probably even bigger!), and then got more confused when he kissed her! Ah, well. Niggling details. Still love it!
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Reviewed By: Miara [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2003 00:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
ROTFL. Tail is hilarious. Must suck to be lord of all you survey, except for one rebellious (fluffy) appendage. I like the way you're switching back and forth between times. Both Sesshoumarus are interesting, and I can't wait to see what happens next. More Tail!
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Reviewed By: Unseen Watcher On: September 25, 2003 17:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Another chapter! Well written, too. Trust me, you deserve the rating. I check every day on this fic! Very nice!
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Reviewed By: Michi-Chan6 On: September 25, 2003 08:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Those last two chapters were great! I was laughing so hard. Anyways please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Dark Topaz [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2003 19:01 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can't wait for more
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Reviewed By: REDWOLF On: September 24, 2003 08:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sess is just soooooooo cute ;-)
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