| "Ripples" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lady Phoenix On: September 23, 2003 16:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow im really enjoying this story. i love sess/kag fics. keep up the good work cant wait to see more chapters.
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Reviewed By: Aira^o^ On: September 23, 2003 15:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
How cute! Keep writing this is good! I wonder what Sesshoumaru(Past) will do when Kagome get back? Keep writing! Chimera is really good too!
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Title: Ripples
Reviewed By: Raquel On: September 23, 2003 14:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this fic!!!! I hope you post next chapter soon!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
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Reviewed By: Ariane Adora [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2003 03:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
9 on style because rarely your style isn't consistent, and 9 on spelling because you misspelled a word in... oh I don't remember what chapter, but you did. But that doesn't matter! Your fic is still terrific! I really like how you changed things up a bit but still kept everyone in character, with the exception of Kagome/Lynx, but that wouldn't be possible. Sesshoumaru is so sweet, and his tail!!!! That was so hilarious. So great, my goodness. I bow to your greatness and laugh in fear of the almighty Arella!
~Ariane |
Reviewed By: REDWOLF On: September 20, 2003 13:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A tail with a mine of its own (HAHAHAHAHA). Ok, (I've calmed down now)so Sess is feeling different about a lot of things in both eras, right??? |
Title: oh yeah
Reviewed By: egyptiny On: September 20, 2003 11:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon an eamail at clttlc2003.com when you do i love story i think Kagome shoulds say with the past sess. not the on in her time i like the old sess. better |
Reviewed By: kagomesirene [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2003 05:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh man!YAY!
I absolutly LOVED the last two chapters!!!
Please kepp on writing cause this story is sooooooo good!
Please update soon!
Ja ne
* kagomesirene * |
Reviewed By: Aira^o^ On: September 20, 2003 05:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh My Gods! What we fan girls wouldn't give to be in the same possition as the lucky miko! I really love you ideas, it's very interesting and original!
Gotta love that tail most though, kawaii!!
Keep writing your stories are one of my fav! |
Reviewed By: Dark Topaz On: September 20, 2003 03:15 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am glad u updated can't wait for more |
Reviewed By: kagomesirene [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2003 14:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow your story is really good!!!!!
I love sess/kag pairings and the idea that our heros lived long enough to meet Kag in her time!
Please update soon!
Ja ne
* kagomesirene * |
Reviewed By: Dark Topaz On: September 19, 2003 11:57 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update |
Title: Ripples
Reviewed By: Unseen Watcher On: September 17, 2003 21:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
9 until I see how it ends. Trust me, I usually rate things pretty hard, but I'm enjoying myself immensly. Reading on . . . |
Reviewed By: jazzylady [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2003 21:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, J.D. Just wanted to say that I love your fic-but then again, you already know that. To all the other people out there here is my wisdom for the day. (clears throat) yells: Hey everyone, you'd better read this and like it. Review it, too, 'cause the author's my sister and I'll have to live with her grumpiness if you don't!
That's all I have to say. |
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