"Evils Sweet Seduction" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: silvermoon8573 On: March 30, 2005 14:39 CST Comment/Review: This was awesome. There were some grammar problems, but it was still good. Update! What's taking you so long.
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Title: ressa Reviewed By: mickiressa [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 21:04 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love evil Syaorans too. I like the fic so far too. it makes me wanna write my own. Any who keep up the good work and update soon. ressa
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Reviewed By: blossom10 On: February 09, 2004 14:17 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i really like it can you try to get the next chapter up soon???
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Reviewed By: Syaoranlover On: January 27, 2004 15:24 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: WOO!! ^_^ This is great! I adore S&S and I read their fanfiction all of the time. I don't write it but I read it. I just wanted to say that I think the basic idea of this story is great. Most of the time when reading this fanfiction you read about Sakura being this wonderfull princess and Syaoran being a prince comes and sweeps her off of her feet. But in your story you do a wonderful job of changing everything. Sakura is a fighter in this story, and syaoran is a cold hearted bastard. I do believe that Syaoran and Sakura being together like that could be essential to the plot. I can tell by reading this chapter that Sakura is eventually going to warm Syaoran's heart, but that is for the future, and is to evolve through the up-and-coming chapters. I think for editing you should read your chapters out loud to yourself because it is easier to hear your mistakes. When reading stories to yourself your mind tend to fix the mistakes. Your plot is wonderful and I especially like the fact that you give small overview's for the chapters that are next. I can only being to ponder what will happen in the next chapter. If you would like any idea's please email me to get them, or please email me to tell me when you update. Thank you! SakumaRyuichi31@yahoo.com
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Title: Write, write, WRITE!!! Reviewed By: _kawaii_sakura_ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 21:18 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OMG CONTINURE THIS FANFIC IT'S REALLY INTERESTING!!!
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Title: :) Reviewed By: Dark cat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2003 13:15 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I loved it
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Reviewed By: Dark cat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2003 13:15 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I loved it
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Reviewed By: japan's flower On: September 21, 2003 09:56 CDT Comment/Review: pleeeezzzzzzzzzzzzzz finish
its not bad. evil lee.....cool |
Reviewed By: whocare [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2003 22:25 CDT Comment/Review: i suck at these things. but ur story is very good |