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| "School Days" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: White Fang On: September 12, 2004 05:26 CDT
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i can t undersand a word your saying!
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Reviewed By: angel0fs0rr0w666 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 01:33 CST
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umm... can you give us first person narrative, 3person objective, or something like that, coz things are starting to get REALLY confusing. and i had no idea what the hell was going on coz of the font or how the writing style was, and im sorry, but the story was just toooooo looooooooong. but, i liked the begining
| Title: I tried...
Reviewed By: inuyoukai2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2003 15:25 CST
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I tried to read this story, hoping that you stopped using the shorteners (newayz, 2, goin, BTW, b4, etc) But you still used them it the story. If you typed out the full word, your story would be longer, and would appear to have more to it. I couldn't read the story though, it got on my nerves. It seemed like you were just typing for reviews and visits. ps. condoms don't come in boxes of 150.
| Reviewed By: darksqall [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2003 17:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
its a good fic write soon plz
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