| "Saikuza life" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: gallatica^^ On: September 25, 2003 05:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
hI! ^_^ ooh...nice! but what's with the dialouge form? XD i think it's better without dialouge form, makes it more interisting to read...XD ^_^ continue!!! goku only 16? still underage? XD lol...
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Reviewed By: gallatica^^ On: September 25, 2003 04:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
^_^ heheh... on to the next chappie!
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Reviewed By: snooperjgsanzo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2003 09:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey pal..
nyc fanfic!
nway, b thankful dat i rated ya
though i made A bit of research, you're STILL grammar-short, yet overall, it's good
peace out!!
~sNOOPERjgSANZO |
Reviewed By: snooperjgsanzo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2003 22:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
another good fanfic, my lil' dude!!
nway, much peace, read mine...
~sANZO and sNOOPERjgSANZO
PEACE OUT! |
