| "A little advice" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: so sad
Reviewed By: anonymousgirl On: October 01, 2005 14:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! that was sooooo great! I love how in character Trunks was. The moral is great and i hope you'll keep writing meaningful works like this. The ending was perfect, if i was writing this fic i wouldn't have it any other way!. Laters!
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Reviewed By: Lord Anubis On: November 01, 2003 04:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Most impressive, a touching storyline and u got the moral in there 2 well done. Exellent use of gud old british slang, wud the characters actually use that? if ure son was dyin wud the last thing u said to him be "yeah laters"? anyway betta than i cud do so a big well dun. Clap Clap
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Reviewed By: Just Ben On: October 03, 2003 10:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow,, that was good Aimee. I don't get the trunks thing, u'll have 2 explain it 2 me sometime. Maybe I should add some of my stuff or is it a Pokemon only website? I write stuff 2 b.t.w, but totally different from urs.
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Reviewed By: Pauliesmom3 On: September 21, 2003 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Powerful work. I hope everyone gets the point. Drunk drivers steal lives.
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