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Title: Bullet
Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2003 03:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read the prequel and was more than happy to see that the story is going on. I like the way you make Heero always analyse the situtation looking for an explanation or a solution. And now he is waiting for Duo to return. I can't help it, I've got the feeling that there was more to Duo's behaviour than just being afraid of the situation. Heero's attempt to distract him with a fake memory was nice. But I wouldn't be suprised when in the next chapter Heero has to rescue an injured Duo.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 04, 2003 00:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG. Did Heero actually tried to distract Dou? Wow. This is a first. I like it. Wait, I take it back, I'm getting tired of the cliffhangers. It's not fair. You better update soon.
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: princesspriscillamaxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2003 00:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a beautifully written story. Please don't leave me hanging in suspense. I enjoyed it very much so thank you for putting it up for all to read.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 01, 2003 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Noooooooooooooooooo... a cliff hanger. You have to update soon, I want to know what happens next. Keep up the good job.
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Title: Momma Cat
Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2003 01:48 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very awesome story. Heero the human computer. I just wish you would give me the lemon though. *sigh*
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: September 25, 2003 22:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a chapter? I love Heero, no way I take that back I love Dou. Wait, what I wanted to say is: I love this fic and I like the way you depict Heero's and Dou's relationship. I can't wait to read the lemon, so update soon.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: September 21, 2003 16:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh! This fic or sequel is really sweet, well in it's own weird kind of way. I liked it.
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: September 20, 2003 22:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great shoot. Congratulaitons. |
Reviewed By: Llorona [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2003 15:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
What a great set of stories! Please keep writing this - I love the way you write Heero (very in character!). :) |
Reviewed By: Mukuro [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2003 01:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, you're good. I loved the other story too, the first one, to which this one is a sequel. You should definately continue this.
This is perfect!!! Perfect!!! |
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