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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2006 15:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read Whispers and then this one. I'm really impressed with your style of writing. You probed both their personalities beautifully. You did a great job with your descriptions with their missions and I enjoyed the limes and lemons. Your a very talented author and I look forward to reading more of your stories. Good luck.
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Reviewed By: Dark Ladty Trinity On: November 26, 2003 00:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
W-O-W... that's the end? Oh, I think I'm gonna cry. Must have more! Must have more! This is by far one of the best 1x2 fics I've read. You kept them both in character so well, you made it very original how they became lovers, and the over-all look into Heero's personal thoughts was just amazing. PLEASE WRITE MORE!! Pretty please? With sugar on top?
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2003 23:50 CDT
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Hundcuffed? Am I that bad at spelling? Lol, yeah maybe... Okay it's not the most explicit lemon I've ever read, but it was decently written. Like it didn't have a line like "He slammed his hard dick in the younger man's ass." not that it's not exciting. ^_^ I think it was a good lemon, considering the amount of water I got. =^.^=
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 13, 2003 19:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't think that was a lemon. I say it was more like lime. LOL! Keep up the great job.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 11, 2003 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Update soon and keep up the awesome job.
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Reviewed By: The Firefaery [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2003 15:32 CDT
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Ah, ff.net says no NC-17, which is stated as like, I dunno, explicit sex scenes. Hmm...I don't know if you'd make muster, I can't recall how steamy your lemons are, so yeah, just watch out. They'll kick your story, then your account if you post something similar again. Anyway, good fic. I wanted to smack Heero when he was arguing with himself, and tell him it was okay to save Duo, because Duo was special to him. But yeah, that would go in one ear and out the other, and he'd be all, compromise of mission and what-not! lol ^The Firefaery^
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Reviewed By: MeLaiya On: October 09, 2003 15:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man i love this. Keep up the good work. Your an excellent writer. Ill be waiting for the next update. Chow Babe ;)
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 09, 2003 11:11 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this fanfic. I completely enjoyed it. I liked how Heero was arguing with himself, that was cool. The way Dou admitted to himself his own weakness and turned it into determination to never allow Heero to carry all the emotional burden was great too. I can't wait to read the lemon. Update soon and keep up the AWESOME job.
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Reviewed By: Llorona [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2003 00:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your stories - please please do continue writing in this arc - and the sooner the better ;).
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Title: Geez
Reviewed By: Darklightz On: October 09, 2003 00:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you planning to go into a PSYCHOLOGY major? If not please consider it! God that was awesome. You either have one hell of a background in Biological Psyc. or you did some heavy duty research. Well done. Excellent writing style. The POV's were excellent and nearly dead on. On the grammar I couldn't tell if you were purposefully trying to be off or not. I WANT MORE!! Hurry!!! PLEASE!!(if you can...)
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Reviewed By: Random Person(Momma Cat) On: October 06, 2003 23:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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For the most part this is a great story! I still like Heero's attitude. I do have one complaint...da lemon! In most cases I don't worry all that much about it, but when you said Heero was hundcuffed by Duo I'd thought I'd die from lack of detail. Great story, big tease.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 06, 2003 16:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so shocked at first and I am glad that I read your note at the end of the chapter. I feel so relieved because there won't be major character death. I totally agree with you on the too depressing fics. BTW, I also love how sweet Heero is. Anyways update soon and keep up the good job.
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Reviewed By: MLG On: October 06, 2003 15:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best fics I've ever read. Please update soon I just cannot wait. Great plot so far and I really like the interaction between Heero and Duo.
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Title: sadesama
Reviewed By: sadesama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2003 23:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is probably the best 1x2 fic I've read, and I've read a *lot*. The perspective is unique, and you don't emasculate the characters. (Yeah, I'm trying to tell you I loved it, LOL.)
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Reviewed By: sadesama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2003 23:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is probably the best 1x2 fic I've read, and I've read a *lot*. The perspective is unique, and you don't emasculate the characters. (Yeah, I'm trying to tell you I loved it, LOL.)
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