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Reviewed By: Kitty13 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 10:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
@.@ omg this is such an awesome fic!!!!
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Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 11:26 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read this entire fic in one day, I just could not tear my eyes away from it. This is without doubt umong the most beautiful fanfictions I have ever read. Usually I'm not into AU fics at all but this was so very very very beautiful. You were very good in describing the looks of angels and demons, I could close my eyes and see them in front of me, also, the battle-scenes and lemons were absolutely marvalous. You should really consider becoming a novelist indeed, I'm deeply impressed with this story. The only comment I can give you is that the "falling in love" between Ryou and Bakura was rushed, I think it would have been better if you had them living together for alot longer before actually falling in love. Otherwise, perfectly done! You did the shortcomings and stronger points of angels and demons very well too, and I must compliment you on your knowledge of religions!
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Reviewed By: Haru Mutou On: January 10, 2005 00:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
;__; you have no idea how many times this fic made me cry. I loved it! your an awsome writer, and I'm glad to have been blessed with the chance of reading such wonderful work. ;__; I was kinda disapointed when ryou betrayed malik though, but you deffinatly made up for it ^_^ I am now off to read all your other fic's I can find, hopeing they are just as wonderful.
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Reviewed By: Akari and Kurai [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 21:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Akari: I loved this fic so much...you just don't know how much I loved it!!! It was actually inspireing! I want to write a angel/demon fic now, but i'm afraid i'll be copying you. Kurai: You characterised the four perfectly. And you even got the moods of the other ten done well. Akari: All of the characters, ryou, malik, yugi, bakura, marik, yami, etc. you made them seem like they were real! It was totally awsome! Kurai: By the way you write, you would think that this IS the way heaven and hell should be. And that the Yu-Gi-Oh! cast belongs there... Akari: This fic was perfect in all sence of the word. *Akari and Kurai bow* Both: We both greatly respect you as an authoress and a person. Thank you.
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Reviewed By: Angel of Roses (not logged in) On: November 07, 2004 17:37 CST
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OMG!! You really DID finish it!!!! After the story got canceled at FF.net, I hadn't seen anymore from it! Damn those bastards! But I finally saw the ending! It was so beautiful! =`) I liked the part when Bakura turned into and angel. I wonder if The other guys will too... eventually they will i guess. But anyway, I am so glad Marik killed that fucking bitch, keith.The amn bastard deserved it too. But in the end, they were all happy. You know... I think I'll draw Bakura in his Angel form... if I ever get the chance --; I just loved the way you described him. Where in the world did you get that idea about the demonds changing into angels after *cough* that... You have so many wonderful ideas. Anyway, I have reviewed some of your stories at FF.net as 'Angel of roses' I have the same account name over there. ^___^ This was GREAT!! Ja-ne! ~*~Angela*~*
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Reviewed By: bj On: September 05, 2004 15:55 CDT
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thid esd s good storie pleease put all your stories up here including millium balnce i no you got kicked off ff net but you shouldn't just give uuup like this you if you uup dated more often youwould probley get more reviews you. or just try writing a newone and put mor angest and ad all the yamis and hakres see ya and please righ t back.
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Reviewed By: someone-who-loves-this-story On: August 23, 2004 00:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow.that story was amazing.i spend 2 whole days reading this story. i loved this story. you should consider becoming a novelist.
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Reviewed By: Sikandra (ChiisaiKodomo368@aol.com) On: August 03, 2004 03:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I still can't believe it's over! I've reviewed this chapter, what, twice? Three times? But I will have to keep reviewing. Otherwise I will cry because IT IS OVER! *wails* Now, since you seem to have STOPPED writing This is Stupid, and I can't FIND any of your other amazing stories (as I said, adultfanfiction is being EVIL) I have nothing to look forward to! Except maybe reading Brontophobia over and over and over. But still. It's not my favorite one! That would forever be Forever Autumn, you see. I am quite loyal to you as a fanfic writer, and you are at the top of my list! I swear, if I don't find out what happened to the rest of your stories soon...you know, if you plan on putting them on this site, if you plan on finishing them, when I will get to read them again...I will go completely ballistic and do something drastic, like climbing up to the top of the Rocky Mountains in the middle of winter with my hair wet. If you have one ounce of humanity in you, please e-mail me and let me know! And don't be mean like that other fanfic author who got all mad at me just because I asked her, casually, when she planned to update again...onegai?
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Reviewed By: Sikandra (ChiisaiKodomo368@aol.com On: August 03, 2004 03:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, that was an awesome story! My favorite still is and always will be Forever Autumn, but this one was awesome! You are a terrific, wonderful, amazing authoress!And I wanna read read the rest of your stories again, as I said before...er...many times. I thought Rose Thorne was my favorite authoress, but she is now my second-favorite instead. You pulled ahead of her. I just decided now. So...my e-mail address is right up there. Feel free to e-mail me! And no, I am not insane. I am perfectly harmless. I simply like to e-mail back-and-forth with my very favorite fanfic authors, that's all. Oh, and BTW, from now on, if I don't rate your stories, you can assume they are all tens.
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Title: Sikandra (ChiisaiKodomo368@aol.com)
Reviewed By: Hana_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 02:18 CDT
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Beg pardon, my e-mail address is actually ChiisaiKodomo368@aol.com. Not 360. 368. Gomen!
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Title: Sikandra (ChiisaiKodomo360@aol.com)
Reviewed By: Hana_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 02:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all, I just want to say that I've loved every chapter I've read of this story so far. Secondly, I want to ask you how you got to know so darn much about all those religions. The author's note at the end of this chapter was very educational! Update your other stories soon. Oh, and I also wanted to tell you that I wanna read Koibito Yami so so so so so so SO bad, and I tried to read it on adultfanfiction, but it wouldn't give me the actual chapters! How do I read this story? I don't usually use adultfanfiction so I wouldn't know. So if you could find a way to tell me, be it through e-mail or whatever, I'd be very very greatful. Thank you! Oh, and are all your other stories on adultfanfiction too? Like Forever Autumn (in my opinion, the best story ever written on any site) and Trapped (second best) and This is Stupid, and all those other greats out there? And would you please consider answering these questions? I know I've asked too many times, but I love the stories so much! Thanks again for putting up with me!
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Title: sorry
Reviewed By: yami-shi-tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 08:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had to review agin its just so WOW!!!!!! I must be annoying Ill go but plaese email me if you wish to talk bye!!!!! oh bye the way your story is like the greatest story I ve read in along time!!!!!!
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Title: Yami-Shi-Tenshi
Reviewed By: yami-shi-tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 08:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that was wonderful !!!!!!!!! I loved it it was outstanding omfg I cant get over how good this story was !!!!!!you need to make a Squel or something like you know the council comes back and they want revenge and so everything is taken care of and m/m y/y mate and all its just WOW!!!!! i love it some much oh by the way I LOVE YOU for making such a great story OMFG!!!!! I just cant get over how good this is you can contact me at Tsuki_godess_07@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: Tayko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 09:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the ending!!! *sniff* so beautifull!!! i love the whole story!!! i love it!!! i love it!!! i love it!!! and have i already said that i LOVE IT!!! i gotta admit i panicked when i could'n find the sory on ff.net anymore but i found it again!!! YES YES YES!!! would you like to write on my site to? your the best!!! and i need witers of good quality(thit i spell that right? i'm from holland) my site is http://groups.yahoo.com/little_Dragon it would be an honour if you would write there*bows at your feet and kisses the floor* PWEASE? Kiss Tayko
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Reviewed By: Bishojo_Inferno [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 14:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the ending! I thought you did a amazing job on this fic, and i'm glad your back! ^^! Will you try to post back on ff.net? Well, anyways, later!
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 03:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTTTOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! *GLOMP* Oh my gods I found youy again! When I saw that you weren't on ffnet anymore I cried! I thought I'd never get to see your work again, or get to finish your tearing down the sky story! But I gave it one last ditch effort here because I had tried before and you weren't listed here. I'm soooooooo glad that i found you again! and I love how you ended the story, and I am sooo glad that Keith died and please write more very very very soon! We love you and I am soooo glad that you're back! *DOUBLE WHAMMY GLOMP!!*
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Reviewed By: RyouLuver On: July 16, 2004 05:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story!!!!!!!11 I printed all the pages out from three yamis and a hikari, Ihatit. I crave it, and tearing down the sky!!!!!!!!!!! I hope you write more!!!!! They FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I may be a bi but you're my favoritis author !!!!!!!!!1 Wait........that didn't even make sense....... oh well ^-^
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Reviewed By: Moosenogger On: July 07, 2004 22:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God, I LOVE this story! *cries* I just can't believe it's over. ;_; I've just been reading along with the updates for so long now, I feel kinda lost. All well, I'll just have to keep up with Burning Sea. Hope that one has a ways to go before it ends. o.O I wuv you, Hato, and I absolutely HATE Fanfiction.net for deleting you!!!
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Reviewed By: silver ferret (if only i could log in) On: July 04, 2004 22:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was Awesome! I love how it ended! The people at fanfiction are meanies, and the person that kept reporting you must have been a jerk. Your writing is great! Keep it up!
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Title: Chapter 22
Reviewed By: PeRiDoTs13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 13:20 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool chapter. I really enjoyed this one. Into Araboth, eh? How interesting.
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Reviewed By: PeRiDoTs13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 12:51 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It sucks that you got deleted off ff.net. I like the style of that site better than mm.org, but oh well. I have to say, I'm not enjoying this fic as much as I've enjoyed some of your others, like Koibito Yami. I loved that fic. This ones a bit more blah to me. I just feel this is a bit sappy, in a bad way. I liked it better in the beginning, but you're sort of dragging it out now. Not that it's bad or anything. Just not as good. I'm sorry.
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Reviewed By: bjsu On: July 02, 2004 04:44 CDT
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i loved the ending i see ffn did it agian just forget about them I wrote them a bigg meeean letter o how there not beinb fair
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Title: VERY VERY GOOD!!!
Reviewed By: GirlMaverick [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was waiting for you to update on fanfiction.net but it dissapeared. Then I found it here. It was REALLY good. *applauds*
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Title: aka: blu chocobo
Reviewed By: shinigami_shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniff* That was beautiful!! Keith is dead, and everything is at peace^^ How awkward it must be to change like that in the middle of sex and everyone coming in to see. That was also a sweet lemon you wrote! This is my absolute favorite fic ever! You keep us on our edges until the end. You've truly written a masterpiece!^^
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Reviewed By: bjsu On: June 29, 2004 13:07 CDT
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Hey I see you have tearing down the sky hear i realy love this storie . I think you should just give up on fanfiction net there jerks they didn't have to dele oll of the stories I think you shooud givee this web site and adult fan .neeet a chance and put your lemons in there that way if you want to you can put them in millium balaace and bring the storie sorry over here
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Reviewed By: bjsu On: June 29, 2004 13:06 CDT
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Hey I see you have tearing down the sky hear i realy love this storie . I think you should just give up on fanfiction net there jerks they didn't have to dele oll of the stories I think you shooud givee this web site and adult fan .neeet a chance and put your lemons in there that way if you want to you can put them in millium balaace and bring the storie sorry over here
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Title: Holy, Unholy!
Reviewed By: HappyDragon(now if I could just log in . . . ) On: June 29, 2004 08:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Best. Fic. Ever. Or at least it's up there. There're just to many points to go into on why this was just so damn good, but I'll just concentrate on a few. Well 1) It centered on Ryou and Bakura. 2) This was one of those few fics where R isn't beaten by B (Gods that gets so annoying after awhile.) 3) Sort of tied into 2, at the end B is so very comforting and caring to R, he is almost the complete opposite of what we usually see. 4) You killed Keith. 5) Bakura ends up with black angel wings and a halo of fire [black fire? *gets hopeful look in her eyes] 6) So frighteningly original (and yet so very familiar to my own private warped little universe) that I think this story will by haunting me for awhile. 7) The fact that my mind is now filled with angel/demon images of my favorite parings, along with black angel wing styles. Ok, so now 1 question that you will hopefully put up an answer in your look up for, what will Yami and Marik smell like? Ok final thing, I know it's not your fault, but if you can, try to figure out the mysterious symbols so you can clean the look of this fic up. Well I liked this, so I hope to read other works by you. Good luck!
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Reviewed By: mexicaligrl14 On: June 28, 2004 12:51 CDT
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that was such an awsome ending. Keith's finaly dead! YAY!!! I really liked how bakura became an angel at the end but still had black wings. keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: nel On: June 28, 2004 12:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was soooooooooo sweet. I loved it! Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: QueenofGames2 On: June 25, 2004 21:32 CDT
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Gods of Ra when I noticed it had been removed from FF.net I had a bloody heart attack! And oh the joy when I found it here! EEEP! Gods above I can't believe it's truely over! And WOWZA what an ending! Haha Keith got his kumupitz and Bakura's an angel O.o interesting.... But :::Tear:: it's over! ::cries hysterically:: WHYYY Geez I miss a few days from you and suddenly it's all over and done with! Well now what am I going to look forward to? You have no idea how excited I got when I found you had up dated! I mean damn it was like I saw Bakura naked or something! (snickers) Well it was deffenetly a fantastic ending, one I hope you are very proud of because I know I am. I will miss this story, but it will live on in my "Finished Stories" file! The *Queen Of Games*
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