Reviewed By: Tjal On: September 22, 2003 18:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehe. How can I resist such a request like that? *grin* Sorry - I can't really remember how well your spelling and grammar was, but nothing glaring popped out at me so I dumped it in 8. ^^;; I first found your fic on that fandomination place and after I read it, I just had to go check the other sites and see if you'd posted more of it. This fic is awesome - I love your character Raven and the mysteriousness is intriguing. I'll admit I have a soft spot for the Indigo League and the gym leaders there (comes from playing Blue and Yellow so much ;) so I look forward to seeing what'll happen if Raven gets there. (Seems like it'll be awhile though since she's in Johto at the moment) Sounds ominous at the moment though. Is this 'master' a member of Team Rocket? Or those new ones - Team Aqua or that other one? You've set up a nice plot; look forward to more. =)
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