Reviewed By: Shadow Megatron [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 07:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I am being generous with my rating. Leetspeak MSN speak and errors soi bad it's mindnumming, and Begging DESPRATELLY to be Msted True MY skill at writing maybe somewhat laughworthy, but this GODDAMN at least I had to repeat year ten ,if this was meant as a parody it works but the spelling, Gak! The Saian Prince's name is Vegeta! *Shakes his head* I user alternate spellings YES but at least they are correct alternate spellings And Ranma would be toast against Vegeta, that is saying alot, and this Kitsune charater is obviouslly ripping off Jokesenkyo Nanuchuan Amazon moves with disregard unless he is directlly tied to Colonge(Which by species he/she/it is not), then you are begging for trouble with Ranma fans.asd well as setting yourself up for an ugly confrontation with some DBZ fans as well I skimmed this fiction, but the errors and constant leetspeak turns me off, no need for a cold shower, this has diffused the mood, and here I thought I was the only one that had the brass balls to write a bad SI fic, man you take the cake, you completelly disregarded BOTH series and made up a complete bogus race that could possiblly kill off a SSJ4 Goku not to sound nasty or bitter, but this bites, If you had a decent background intro as to why your charater is the way he is, BEFORE you SI'ed him in, then it would be somewhat salvageible, as it is, the only reveiws you will get are bad ones, try harder!
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