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"The Path You Follow" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ]
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 Reviewed By: Aquira  On: April 13, 2004 13:33 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this fic!! Please don't disappear!! I have cookies* hands box to Evilneko* Tell me what kind you like. ;P If you really need it, I voluteer as your personal woo-hoo peep!! Go! Go! Go! Here's my E-mail just in case ok? I'm here for you. aquaphoenix@excite.com Lady Aquira
 Title: I like it
Reviewed By: Crash's Angel  On: April 12, 2004 22:19 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like this fic, and I've been reading it for a while now. I'm just too lazy to write a review every chapter. Well, if you want to continue, I say continue, but if you're having problems, perhaps it would be a good idea for you to take a break and work on something else for a while until you get an idea. Later - Crash
 Title: Awesome Chapter 11
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 28, 2004 22:11 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Awesome update. Can't wait to see how Shippou and Rin are rescued. Please update again soon.
 Reviewed By: Lady Kaela [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 30, 2004 19:36 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I loved it. Please update soon.
 Reviewed By: Rhexi  On: January 30, 2004 19:11 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Still as beautiful as your last story! I myself am a very large Sesshoumaru fan and I really appreciate you describing his perfect body in such perfection! *drool* A VERY satisfactory new story and please update soon!
 Title: YOU UPDATED!
Reviewed By: Riomi [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 23, 2004 15:39 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Stop trying to be so modest! Its a great chapter and you know it! LMAO Ok Ok, I would enjoy some type of fluff between some other characters due to our lack of Kag/Sess lurv...lol. Anyway it's good that your fic doesn't just revolve around sex and violence, it has actual plot! Which can be hard to come by lately...I once again commend your wonderful description and choice of words...I thought it was ubercute the way you listed what Shippou picked up from Kisho, he couldn't even remember the lords name (great touch) I don't know how patient I can be waiting for the next chappies...*big grin* This time around my roommate stated that I acted like a normal human being instead of a insane rabid fangirl while reading this chappy...he's so mean *pouts* either way because of that he said he's going to give this fic a try and read it...I'll make sure he drops a review....lol well as usaul I'm rambling... Riomi
 Reviewed By: Aira^o^  On: January 05, 2004 20:54 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey!! I'm back! .. I really would have had this review up sooner but .. blame it on my cousins.. they are com hoggers!!! GAHH!! :: trying her best to push them away :: .. ... Well Keep writing!! and I will be waiting for the next chapter!!
 Title: omg wow
Reviewed By: japanese_angel12  On: January 04, 2004 01:31 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
this is "WOW"...i luv this fic. its so good. its so detailed, original, and so ...can't think of any other words to describe it. its that good. the lemon was good too. plz update real soon
 Title: Another great masterpiece
Reviewed By: Riomi (I'm too lazy to sign in) [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 15, 2003 12:49 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I am in love with this fic! I think that it is every bit true to the character! In all honesty I have been waiting for someone to write how Kagome doesn't want to become immortal because it sounds all great but its no fun to watch everyone die... Anyway the inner turmoil of Sesshou-kun about that situation is excellent! Also the dream is so vivid and I love the way you reveal just enough to make us want to remember that particular scene. Please take your time with writing because excellence cant be rushed! Oh yeah just so you know: Your in my group (fanfics in the night) It's great to have you aboard! Riomi
 Title: Amazing...
Reviewed By: Riomi [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 19, 2003 10:12 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You sooo made me cry! I still am crying! My roommate passed by the computer and thought that someone died cause I was bawling...lol. I love the way you choose your words for each setting...Kami I'm gonna cry some more... well I loved this udate and can't wait til you do it again. I will be sure to check out your One-Shot... just because you wrote it. I don't care what the pairing is it only matters who the writer is ~_^ Riomi
 Title: Yep me again!!
Reviewed By: Aira^o^  On: November 12, 2003 02:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Hi its me again!! ... Just.. not quite sure about one things.. and I forgot to put it in the last review (being too piss off at the yaseookami).. you know about when Yukiko ask Kagome when she wake up "But. . . should you not be happy, Kagome-san?" .... shouldn't that be one of the soul and not Yukiko herself?..... correct me if I'm wrong but .. only Kagome had wake up from the curse right? . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . :: turn to Kouga :: . . . You better to keep a low profile for now Mr. baka.. if I'm correct YOU CALLED KAGOME YOUR WOMAN 3 TIMES!!!! . . . . . . well hope you up date soon ^o^
 Reviewed By: lil_sesshi [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 10, 2003 15:49 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
that was really good i hope you can update soon..
 Title: Damit
Reviewed By: Riomi [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 10, 2003 13:43 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
How could you stop there! Its not fair! Wahhh! Ahem* Please update! I can't wait to see how Sesshou-kun reacts when he wakes up and i can't wait to see how Kagome acts when she talks to him about...love...I'm blabbing so let me just stop here ok? lol X3 Riomi...Your dedicated reader!
 Title: Chapter 9
Reviewed By: Aira^o^  On: November 10, 2003 01:08 CST
Comment/Review:
'What the hell do you mean Kouga-no-baka!!!!' ::Aira beating the hell out off the wolf prince while the Inu-taichi watch in the back ground along with her bishounen :: . .. . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .'You practially ran to Sesshoumaru and yell at his face .. and I quote. . . "Oi, you bastard, what are you doing with my woman?". . . . Your woman? Your WOMAN!!! and just how the hell are you gonna explain that huh? ::Stil beating Kouga with her 100 tons hammer:: . . . . . . . . . and to think I fell sorry for you!! . . . ::THUMP!! THUMP!! Yaseookami!!:: . . . . . . . . Now Sesshoumaru is hurt!!! baka wolf!!! . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . :: Inu-taichi and her bishounen esp. Hiiro are trying to clam her down:: . . . . . . . . . Fine.. meh!!! :: throw a beaten to puff Kouga to EvilNeko-chan feet :: . . . . . . . Sorry about that but I don't think he will be making an appearace any time soon.. but who know... with lots of make up, it might just cover up all the stuff I left for him... yaseookami .. .. .... ... ... Oh.. yeah thanks a lots!! this chapter is great!! I have had a great work out too!! . . . . . .. .. . Till next time.. Ja ne!!
 Title: Chapter 7
Reviewed By: Aira^o^  On: November 06, 2003 14:00 CST
Comment/Review:
Ok.. that was rather interesting.. heh heh.. I hope Sesshoumaru won't tore apart Kouga just yet.. I do love to see (well read) the shock on his face once he learn that Kagome is now the Lady of the Western Lands!! . . . . . . . Glad you have update!! . . . . You make my day!! I was totally stress out from an exam yesterday, Thanks!!
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