| "The Path You Follow" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Title: Yay you updated!
Reviewed By: Riomi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2003 10:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again i am amazed as to how you do it... I love every story you have put up so far please never stop writing! Hmmm... are you going to have Sesshou-Kun really kill Kouga-Kun? Wouldn't that turn into a big disaster...lol. Well hurry and update i cant wait to see how Kagome handles herself! Riomi
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Title: Chapter 6
Reviewed By: Aira^o^ On: October 29, 2003 14:28 CST
Comment/Review:
Well.. the story is good.. but if you don't read 'Bliss..' before hand.. it can be a little confusing.. But hey!! I like this fic! . . . . . . . . . . and oh..h what we fan would gives to have the Lord of the Western Lands, Sesshoumaru in bed with us all day . . . . . . . . . Lucky Kagome, . .. . . . and ohhh Kouga is finally making an appearance huh? . . . . . . . . . . . Next chapter will be most interesting!
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Reviewed By: Aira^o^ On: October 25, 2003 21:37 CDT
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Oh.. sure.. sure.. :: snickers :: Hey!! this is getting more and more intense . . . . . . I hope most people whoes did read "Bliss.." would reviews more of this fic . . . . . . . Damn ff.net for taking down that fic.. :: pouted :: . . . . . . . . now not many people know the sequal :: sniff, sniff ::
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Title: Chapter4
Reviewed By: Aira^o^ On: October 17, 2003 06:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Heh heh . . . Of course I like lemon! and your fic are good! . . . I wonder what will happen now.. just have to wait and see ne? . . . . oh and feel free to talk to me about the Sess/Kagome relationship thing if you want here is my email . . Aira_o_@hotmail.com
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Title: Chapter3
Reviewed By: Aira^o^ On: October 14, 2003 20:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good to see your fic up so soon, I really do love this fic... ::LOL:: . . . The lemon was good too! . . . I do understand, when you have other people around over your sholder while you read (or in your case write) can be a real pain -_-;;;; . . . Keep it coming, this is good . . . I do hope that Sesshoumaru will find some way to extend Kagome's life . . . who know may be the Tenseiga might be the key to it all, once I did come across a fic that had that sword as a binding of youkai and ningen couple . . . . ps . . Yes ff.net was a pain in lemon part . . . they took off 'Obessions with a Seraph' and your fic! . . along with some other really good one too . . :: sigh ::
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Title: Chapter3
Reviewed By: Aira^o^ On: October 12, 2003 01:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Poor Kagome, poor girl.. . . ::sniff, sniff:: . . . Well good chapter! although I sort of expecting lemon heh, heh . . but good work by all means! Keep it coming, doesn't matter I'll be waiting happily . . . just don't leave us hanging for too long that all ::wink, wink::
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Reviewed By: Sesshi and Youko lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2003 23:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is great i love it just as much as the first one!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!
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Title: this was great
Reviewed By: Riomi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2003 12:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow i really love your work...Please update soon. I also have a question when will we find out about this evil miko that trapped the spirits in the the cherry? I can't wait to find out! Riomi
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Title: Sugoi!
Reviewed By: Helen On: September 28, 2003 18:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sugoi, another chapter. ~jumps up and down~ Maa, I must say your alternate beginning scene was hilarious, especially the part where Kagome yelled at the two siblings about being bakas. LOL. Anyway, keep up the good work and update as soon as possible. Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Aira^o^ On: September 28, 2003 14:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
I was. Now that it out, I wonder what the Eastern Lands Lord want? Who know? Just have to wait and see. Hope the next chapter will be out soon!
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Title: Yay the sequel
Reviewed By: Helen On: September 24, 2003 13:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, I'm the first person to review. ~does the happy dance~ Okay, down to the matter at hand, my comments. First, I'd like to say that I truly enjoyed reading this story with everyone's seperate POV. Demo, how could you leave it with a cliffhanger? Another thing, you did have a mispelled word. The correct way to spell thank you in Japanese is as follows "arigato". Guess that's it for now. Hope you update soon. Ja ne.
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