| "The Earth Child" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Rubel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 01:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
very cool. I like how you've messed with things while keeping tru to the original series.
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Reviewed By: Shiva-kun [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2003 00:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
I just did. And as for the hiatus, I got a new laptop, and DSL, so...I was kinda off having fun. Anyway, regular updates are back.
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Reviewed By: YuPpErZ On: October 15, 2003 18:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic except its kinda confusin sometimes. ya GoTz tuh update
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Reviewed By: Shiva-kun [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2003 00:44 CDT
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Ahh, finally someone reads disclaimers. To those of you who kept seeing this story popping up and then disappearing, it's because I was trying to get the webmaster to fix a problem with how the fics looked. It was 'fixed' but it looked worse than before, so it's back to the way it was...only a little worse. Eh, it's what I get for trying to get it perfect. Anyway, I hope you enjoy this story. There's 44 chapters, and about half of em are filled with lemony goodness.
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Reviewed By: Jay Man On: September 23, 2003 00:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well this story looks to be as enthralling as the others and I look forward to it. Though I do think the author is exaggerating Akane's lack of cooking skill, since the manga did show her pulling off at least one good meal. I think she could cook just fine if she relaxed and kept her temper while doing it. But that is just my opinion so take as that. I really liek these fic and though I know Shiva-kun doesn't really write them I am glad someone posts them.
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