| "The longing of two souls" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Destinys Lot On: March 02, 2004 02:18 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting writing style, it made short work of the story but still made it enjoyible. Ja ne
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Reviewed By: Blakkmollie On: November 05, 2003 09:51 CST
Comment/Review:
Past of present tense, make up your mind! There's some grammar mistakes and the constant shifting of POV is a little annoying, otherwise ok.
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