"Take My Picture" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2006 12:55 CST Comment/Review: this was great!
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Reviewed By: YohjiBabe2008 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 20:46 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: HURRY THIS IS GETTING GOOD!!!!! WHY HIS HE CRYING. I NEED TO KNOW WHY. hopefully this writer's block will pass but.....THIS IS THE BEST STORY I HAVE READ TODAY!!!!!! PLEASE HURRY!!!!
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Title: Citrussy101 Reviewed By: Citrussy101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 14:32 CDT Comment/Review: AHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! WHY IS HE CRYING?!?!?!?!?! pleeeaaassse, pleeeeaaaassse, write more fast!!!
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Reviewed By: Sky Rat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2004 20:21 CST Comment/Review: Oh, how can you leave it there?! That chapter made me sooo sad, it's nice to know that things are looking up at the end, but I really needed a happy fix to make up for the rest of the chapter. Please focus on this one so we don't have to wait too long to see Ran and Yohji together (and finally feeling better). I remember reading this the first time 'round on ff.net, where it stopped at chapter 2. Man, that was a frustrating place to leave off. I'm sooo glad to finally get chapter 3. Oh, I really hope Ran ends up okay, and not utterly messed up for ever and ever ;__; Well, anyway, good job.
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Reviewed By: Lavender M [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2003 03:37 CST Comment/Review: Wow, you've totally got me wanting to read the next part of this. I loved all the liberties you took with Ran's character. It just makes me want to see him get with Yohji even more. Great job! ^_^
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Reviewed By: wingofshinigami [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2003 23:20 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: You better hurry up and update don't leave me hanging
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Reviewed By: Jade green (too lazy to log in) On: October 24, 2003 13:42 CDT Comment/Review: Eeee! Poor Ran! Poor Yohji! That's a BAD schuschu! o.o I can't wait to read the rest!
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Reviewed By: Maple On: September 27, 2003 22:16 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: wow! okay u definitely got me hooked. More!
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Reviewed By: Deceased Laugh [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2003 14:01 CDT Comment/Review: Hey skeptical cat... this is MY fanfic... I posted it on FF.net, then removed it. It's now posted here and FF.net. No one stole it. IT IS MY FANFIC! If you eish to complain, please do so through e-mail, not a review. Deceased Laugh
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Reviewed By: aki the wolf On: September 23, 2003 16:32 CDT Comment/Review: greatness
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