| "Knowing Eyes" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] |
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Title: Hey!
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 22:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehehe! KWAII! lol, yay for Kagome! im just curios as to what a stasis spell is....humm...guess ill hafta wait ne? sigh, ah well! good chappie! i LOVED it! hehe, plz update asap! Ai-Lani
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Reviewed By: Star Katt [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 08:48 CDT
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Yea! Children! Yea! Inu-ears! Kagome's mother will be sooooooo happy. L8r. Can't wait 4 more ^.~
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Title: Hey!
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2003 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! wow! omg! i LOVE this story! hehe! i have a um....lemon story too, but yea i still hafta rite the lemon scene...but ne way, heh! wow! your good at riting lemon scenes, especially since this is your first one! mine isnt that good.....well, ne way, good story so far n i cant wait for u to update! Ai-Lani
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Reviewed By: VicFan On: October 09, 2003 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I gave you a 7 for the style of writting because it was kind of hard to read with words deleted or missing. You also had words put together. All-in-all, the story was fantastic and fun to read.
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Reviewed By: Icy_Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2003 19:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic! I like very much! Can't wait to see what happens next soo update soon!
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Reviewed By: Star Katt [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2003 13:44 CDT
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oooooo, red eyes?! sumthing there we don't kno bout? Hmmmmm, hehehe. Can't wait 2 find out! L8r g8r
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Reviewed By: Star Katt [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2003 20:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
ooooooo, whats going 2 happen now? oooooooo
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Reviewed By: SevenStar On: October 06, 2003 18:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need a someone to look over the story and help clean it a bit. Overall it a great story.
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Reviewed By: inuyashasdemonchild [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2003 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a wonderful fic plz finish it is by far the best i had ever read =)
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Reviewed By: Amelia Silver On: October 05, 2003 14:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you have a good idea going but your spelling, grammar and screw ups make it a harder read than it should be. I'm not trying to flame you or anything, I just think you should have a friend proofread each chappie so you can fix it. That way it will be much better. And you don't want Inuyasha saying Aishiteru (you spelled it Ashiteru) it is very VERY strongly suggesting LOVE if you get my drift. Use Koishiteru, it's like "I love you" between b/f and g/f.
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Reviewed By: Star Katt [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2003 11:45 CDT
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ooooooo, kewl. ^-^ what an interesting story. O.o can't wait 4 more. L8r
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Reviewed By: Star Katt [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2003 23:24 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh, I looooovvvvvveeeee it!!! Hope u write more real soon. L8r g8r ^.~
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Reviewed By: lviyf; On: September 26, 2003 04:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your good
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Title: Knowing Eyes
Reviewed By: Anime Master [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2003 23:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT! PLZ KEEP UPDATING! I WANNA SEE WHAT HAPPENS! Your Friend, Anime Master
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Title: Knowing Eyes
Reviewed By: nightmagic17 On: September 25, 2003 12:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is realy good. Keep up the good work. Cant wait to see what happens next.
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