| "Knowing Eyes" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] |
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Reviewed By: Inu-Shinta [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2005 21:50 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have enjoyed reading your story very much. Kagome wearing lingerie is kind of a reading fetish of mine, the only thing that is as enjoyable is if both Kagome and Inuyasha were half-demon or full-demon.
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Title: thats was good
Reviewed By: hakura3241 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 21:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
if you do a fanfic with inu and kagomes kids I will read it you make great stories I am shocked how good this was
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Reviewed By: bubbles-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 23:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow, this is really good (so far) I'll read the rest some other time (cuz it's a school night)...yeah, I'm a horny person...lol! Anywayz, this is a great romantic fic for romantics like me! (I'm such a dork! ^_~) Awesome job!
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Reviewed By: silver rythm On: December 10, 2004 19:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
not bad keep up the good work this story kicks A$$
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Reviewed By: Kat22(same as neko 22 and kitty22) On: December 04, 2004 17:01 CST
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NEAT! So that's why Inuyasha trusted her.I really like this story!Please countinue with it. I would really appreciate(sp?) it. Thank you very much. p.s. I use diffrent names but they all mean the same thing if you were wondering.
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Reviewed By: Neko22 On: December 04, 2004 16:24 CST
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...Still like the story.But, can you make chapater 10 easyier(sp?) to read.You don't have to though.It just would be easyier(sp?) to read.Thank you bye.
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Reviewed By: Kitty22 On: December 04, 2004 16:18 CST
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Nice plot.Chapter 9 has some words without spaces and some words BOLD and some words without bold.Really like the story so far though.Please countinue.
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Reviewed By: Star keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 20:17 CST
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YAY KOUGA BITES THE DUST!!! ^-^ *ish happy, no, ecstatic* I like this very very much, and would appreciate it a whole bunch if you update very soon!! (I kno, alot of verys) but I do like this alot, and, as this is your first fanfic, congratulations!! You've either got real talent, or you've been writing for waaay too long before you posted anything..... Hmmmm..... ~~~Starlet~~~
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Reviewed By: parvatilotus [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 13:54 CST
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i really like this story so far, i have only one request... quotation marks, i have a hard time keeping up with the conversations with out them (i know im special *blush*) I really like how Kami put Kouga in his place, though i would have enjoyed seeing Inu put him down too... lol with how fast Kouga is i bet he would be surprised if he couldnt land a hit on Inuyasha. :) great story have a good holiday season, ~Kat
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Reviewed By: SevenStar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 09:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank YOU for updating. I was almost about to give-up on you. Good chapters so far. Please update sooner next time. PLEASE.
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Reviewed By: hakura3241 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2004 18:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice job keep up the good work I can't wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: ginger75125 On: October 30, 2004 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic was great! Very creative. I can't wait for the next chapter. Kami is amazing! She's so cute! She sort of reminds me of one of the girls from Ah! My Goddess. I can't think of her name right now/ Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: inuyashasfavegirl On: October 05, 2004 17:31 CDT
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update already.......u r really good
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Reviewed By: inuyashasfavegirl On: October 01, 2004 18:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U GONNA UPDATE OR WAT?!
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Reviewed By: Fluffy's mate On: September 10, 2004 11:41 CDT
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That was soo cute! Poor Inu...I'd kiss him right there and there man....I hope Kagome makes him feel better soon. Sooo update please!
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