| "Wild Children" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: When Updates???!
Reviewed By: Lady Vicious [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2003 19:27 CST
Comment/Review:
Not meaning to be a bugger but I love this story so much I can't wait for updates. It drives me insane ::pulls out hair:: Just trying to motivate ya. SESSHOMARU-SAMA COME BACK I'LL PUT AWAY THE LEASH!
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Reviewed By: Neko Kagome-chan On: November 08, 2003 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I lurved it! :D We need more Sess/Inu fics nowadays. :D
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Reviewed By: Lady Vicious [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2003 18:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice even though they're a bit out of character but Sesshie still seems true to his manga and anime self. If Inu was really naive like that I would've already been kidnapped him XD
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Title: NICE!
Reviewed By: Vicious Lady On: October 21, 2003 18:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me likes it a lot and hopes you put up more so me can read and also hopes Sesshomaru-sama becomes more of what me sees him as in manga and tv. And me should stop calling myself me. XD. Live on forever yaoi! Hey will Kouga ever come back into the story because I was hoping he'd have a bigger part? No one really uses Kouga much these days, sucks major booty.
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Reviewed By: cherrycheesehead [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2003 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the writing style you use in this fic. I also like the plot, well as much as has been introduced do far. Very original. And your grammar and spelling is doing good. I'm going to be waiting to read more from this story.
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Reviewed By: lybiu On: October 11, 2003 12:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the stile of writing is very caracteristic and personal, about the grammar and speling... inglish is not my original lenguage so my opinion in this in this has no value. originality: has a good plot and the lemon is well placed and soft, if i may say, the only thing out of place is in some moments sesshoumaru speach, but even so, is close to the original profile of the caracter. whatever... i give the fic a 10 overall rating because is necesary consider that this is a au, yaoi fic. i´ll look foward to the next chapter.thanks
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Reviewed By: rAiNwAtEr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2003 01:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think your story is coming along good, keep up the good work I hope to see more soon. =p
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Reviewed By: Sarrow On: October 03, 2003 18:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
eep i love it write more please
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