"The Fates" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: sensei_musume [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 14:31 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: i want to know what happens. i like your stories. you should really continue this one.
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Reviewed By: sm On: June 12, 2004 03:52 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Excellent story. Looking forward to next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Relena Omoa-o-korosu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 08:33 CST Comment/Review: heyt his is REALLY REALLY good. i wanna know. will Sano be able to get the info. or will he get caught. will the wolf get better?? WHEN WILL THEY GET TOGETHER!!??!!?? IS SANO GOING TO BE ABLE TO KEEP ATTENTION LONG ENOUGH TO LEARN STUFF!!??!!?? PLEASE UP DATE *sano puppy dog eyes*
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Title: Great style Reviewed By: ryushin On: January 18, 2004 13:02 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: I really like this ff because the idea is very original. The characters *are* actually characters and not some one dimensional strip-off's. There is a good deal of plot development and an interesting inside - giving Saitou a family history for starters. Although Saitou is ooc and Sano too to some extend it does not diminish the enjoyment of this very well written story. Please go on writing - take your time in order to not let the story slip that would really be a loss. cheers ryushin
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 08:03 CST Comment/Review: I love this story. Please update some more!
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Title: wwwwwwooooooowwww Reviewed By: theevilbitchthatkicksaitoubutt On: January 12, 2004 15:53 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: hey, i think ur fic is great and original and creative and............I love sano/saitou pairings...soooooo ur my new favorite author...lol keep it up and update soooon
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Reviewed By: Lychee SSJ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2004 14:21 CST Comment/Review: you updated!! I am giddy with happiness! I loved the whole planets tilting on their axis thing. Wow, Saitou's dad is a real jerk. Good riddance. I hope school eases up on you so you can update soon :)
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Reviewed By: kassie On: December 21, 2003 13:38 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: very good so far. can't wait for next chapter if there is one.
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Reviewed By: Vitaralastla On: October 11, 2003 20:35 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is a good fic!!! I relly enjoyed the banter between Sano and Saitou. Keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: HoshikoSaitou@2die4.com On: October 04, 2003 08:43 CDT Comment/Review: Write more damn you! Ah, this fic, tis good tis good. Like that other girl said, you're only problem is the Sagara thing, but also Shinsen Gumi. Otherwise this is one of the best Saitou/Sano fics yet. Very good job keeping them in character, I love you for that. Feel free to e-mail me, I love to talk to you. Hoshiko
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Reviewed By: Lychee SSJ [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2003 22:01 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: Wheeee!! another Sano x Saitou fic!! *does happy dance* I like it so far, my only comment is a misspelling; it should be Sagara (with an A) Sanosuke. I love the character interaction; that's just how a sick Saitou should sound, still superior yet annoyed at his illness. Can't wait to see how this progresses. Write more soon? Please? Pretty please with pocky?
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Reviewed By: Eirwen Lai [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2003 16:13 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really liked this, and I can't wait for the next chapter.
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