Title: hate lemon?
Reviewed By: Zani never feels like signing in On: September 27, 2003 23:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey you the story did not suck. It was quite enjoyable. As for the lemon you did really well and the only way to improve is to continue writing. So keep it up. I'll peek in often enough to see what you have written and I promise to leave a review. Unless it is realy bad, then I'll pretend I haven't read it :p
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