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Reviewed By: Liesie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 18:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is the first one I've put on my favorites list. It is well written, next to no spelling or punctuation errors, and not nearly as many confusions of the homophones "then" and "than" that I would have expected to find in a fanfic. I urge you to update your literary delicacy soon, though it seems that you haven't done so in about three years.
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Reviewed By: horsechick [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2006 21:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
are you finished or something your killen me here please i beg of you update
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Title: Lyoko99
Reviewed By: Lyoko99 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 18:28 CDT
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The Quest of the shishigami as a title
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Reviewed By: pretty damn good! update! On: June 03, 2005 00:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
good chapter! update soon man!! (dude its been like 2 years since u updated)
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Reviewed By: kittywhisker On: April 28, 2005 21:59 CDT
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This is great!You're a good writer.the personalities seem very accurate,which is a nice change.I can't tell you how many times I've run into with at least 1 main character OOC.It starts out not being too bad,but it gets pretty annoying.Anyway,awesome fic.please update ASAP.
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_kitsune_tears(Not logged in) [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 00:40 CST
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I love it!!! it seems you have not updated in a while, but I beg that you please finish this story!!! I love the movie, and this story is like the actual sequel!!! there is no sequel, acctually, but this seems like it would be!!! Update please!!!! ~Tsuki
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Reviewed By: Persephone of Abydos On: September 05, 2004 16:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is beautiful.... I need more! *puppy eyes* I hope you continue this story, as I'm thoroughly addicted. ^-^
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Title: Why??
Reviewed By: Sirius The Dark Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 16:03 CDT
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Why the hell have you not update yet!!!!!!!! I mean I really like this story!!!!!!! so update!! For the sake of the Great Forest Sprit update!!!!! or are you dead 0.o
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Title: updat or else!!
Reviewed By: Sirius The Dark Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 23:44 CDT
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if you don't update yopu will know the ture might of a god!!! cause I love this story alot!!!
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Reviewed By: shinimegami82 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 22:12 CST
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Very good fic. Can't wait for more. Please update soon. I love the fact that you've contiued the story of the movie.
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Reviewed By: Darth Zack [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 08:38 CST
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Reviewed By: Darth Zack [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 08:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
update... itz a nice fanfic u noe
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Reviewed By: Mr_Black On: October 27, 2003 19:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: j On: October 26, 2003 12:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful story. All the characters are in character, which isn't seen enough in P. M. fanfics. You took the care to make sure your story is spelled correctly, which makes it easier to read, which always good. Your writing style is rather matter-of-fact. It takes some getting used to, but I've got the same problem (for lack of a better word) and half the talent. Continuation fics are hardly original, but you did a better job on yours than everyone else. I've only read one other story as good as yours.
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