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| "Its Just a Bunch of Hocus Pocus" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: I am me On: November 20, 2003 04:55 CST
Comment/Review:
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| Reviewed By: Kirara_Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2003 21:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
heehee! i love the way Noin acts in this fic, it's so funny!!! ^_^ and yeah, maybe you can make it a bit more "Gundam" and not as much "Hocus Pocus". UPDATE SOOON!!!!
| Reviewed By: moffit1x2x1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2003 02:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
It would be more interesting if you didn't copy directly from the movie and just changing names. This is an interesting crossover idea, and I would read it was done over more originally, even if it is amusing to picture Noin bouncing around like a fool. You could, say, have the Sisters come back in the GW universe's time, and make it a TWT during the war.
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