| "Betrayal" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: Betrayal
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 19:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapter? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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Title: Betrayal
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 19:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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Title: Betrayal
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2005 20:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters? Can you write this story on www.adultfanfiction.net
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Reviewed By: monte00 On: April 15, 2005 16:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
its good, update chapters. pans my favorite too, dont split up her and trunks. oh, but work on the lemons.
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Reviewed By: King Juu-kun On: March 19, 2005 14:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a great story going here. You should update your story. I'm sure there's a lot of people who are wondering what Bra and Marron are going to do. Oh, and remember, just because people don't review doesn't mean their not reading it.
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Title: Betrayal
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 23:40 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: gabyhyatt
Reviewed By: gabyhyatt [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2004 22:42 CST
Comment/Review:
good fic, please update soon.
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Reviewed By: C-town Chica On: December 10, 2003 20:13 CST
Comment/Review:
That was so good! I'm glad that Trunks and Pan bonded. I feel sorry for Marron but I love Pan and Trunks together. Can't wait to see what you have up next.
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Reviewed By: inumoon3 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2003 17:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is really good and I can't wait for you to update the story!!! Update faster especially on Katana!!!
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Reviewed By: SuperFreakSayian [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2003 16:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm a fan of Pan, but not trunks. This was good, and I hope that there are big fans of Pan as I am. Hell, I'm reviewing one. but that was harsh on whatyou did to Marron. Then again, I don't like her all that much
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Title: supahsa
Reviewed By: supahsa [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2003 15:02 CST
Comment/Review:
this is good! ;D update soon! TrunksxPan forever! ^_^ v
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Title: DBZ Rocks
Reviewed By: Trunks girl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 16:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep it cummin! can't wait till the next chappy!
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