| "Day at the Beach" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: pretty good
Reviewed By: TheFieryDriPhilosophy(NLI) On: June 18, 2005 22:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It wasn't the usual erotica with a boy and girl having real sex, but it was also...good. You're really talented at writing this sort of material, you know? You're probably pro. I wish I was....but I'm somewhere in between beginner and pro....sucks. 10.
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Runishie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 22:48 CST
Comment/Review:
Poor tate should've gotten fucked poor thing having to wittness such a thing and it was really good miss. poor tate
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Reviewed By: Oops On: November 14, 2003 19:34 CST
Comment/Review:
Yay! Third review! Okay, sorry if this is bugging you, but the second one was on accident (stupid computer). I just wanted to say P.S. I think you should write more stories! You have terrific talent! lilmisspinky89@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: Bookworm On: November 14, 2003 19:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was very interesting. You have a great writing style.
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