| "Past/Present/Future" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: flyingteapot On: February 24, 2005 20:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my. I never thought I´d find something worth reading here but I was very intrigued by your fic. I like how you write from all our beloved Bebop-heroes´ POVs (except Ein XD) and you´ve got their characters down to the notch. Kudos to that.(I loved how you wrote Faye in Chapter 9!)Even your original characters are fun to read about. Your story starts slow but gives us readers time to adjust to the feeling/atmosphere of the story and the characters. The plot develops slowly chapter by chapter and I can´t wait to see where you´re going with it. As I already said, I´m very intrigued so far. But please check your spelling and grammar, it´s the only flaw of this high quality piece of fanfiction. I hope you´ll update soon, the "completed status" surely is just a mistake. Is it? *looks around hopefully* ^_^
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Reviewed By: elisa ang On: August 13, 2004 23:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wow this is like the best cb fic ive read so far!!! i really mean it this fic has got some serious potential so keep up the good work and update sooner than possible!!!
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Title: Past/Present/Future
Reviewed By: Anime10473 On: October 27, 2003 17:05 CST
Comment/Review:
Whoops! sorry
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Title: Past/Present/Future
Reviewed By: Anime10473 On: October 27, 2003 17:02 CST
Comment/Review:
I like this story alot, so wheres the rest of the chaps? The status says completed, but it's not. So was that an error or do you have it completed somewhere else? UPDATE SOON!! Bye!!
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Title: Past/Present/Future
Reviewed By: Anime10473 On: October 27, 2003 17:02 CST
Comment/Review:
I like this story alot, so wheres the rest of the chaps? The status says completed, but it's not. So was that an error or do you have it completed somewhere else? UPDATE SOON!! Bye!!
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