| "Taking Advantage 01" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: _Dream_ [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 18:59 CST
Comment/Review:
Love it. UPDATE or DIE to all my COMPLAINTS!!!!!!!!!!PWEASE?!?!?!
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Reviewed By: jillz On: April 24, 2004 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
REALLI gud..although a lil rushed...and i dunt like the prospect ofthe grp breakin up...
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Reviewed By: Horse mad On: April 02, 2004 01:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was great
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Reviewed By: YuYuHakusho On: March 07, 2004 01:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Tempest2410 On: February 28, 2004 15:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmm. pretty good.
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Reviewed By: YYH On: February 25, 2004 00:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was cool!I like the X's!(KaiXRai TalaXBrian)heh,Its like a sopeopra thing.Just like a normal clifhanger...!
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Reviewed By: the tigris On: February 11, 2004 19:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Iliked it alots >.^ ~*~the tigris
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Reviewed By: I luv Kai [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2004 14:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice! I love the fact Rei was awake when Kai said that stuff! Are you gonna continue? I hope so! ^^
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Reviewed By: Egyptian_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2003 14:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
hurry!! i need 2 read more pls if u can make it in2 a lemon if not just write more!
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Title: taking advantage reveiw
Reviewed By: xXxBeccaxXx On: October 08, 2003 16:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha i really enjoyed that! i thi k it was clever the writer to write more about the relationship between tala and kai, and the end was wkd! i can wait for the next chapter! rai+kai 4eva!
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Reviewed By: Ryu_Nyu On: October 02, 2003 10:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed that. Hehe, Rei was awaken when Kai said all those stuff, continue!
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Reviewed By: A fan On: September 29, 2003 16:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well 1-Totally OCC (Out Of Character) (For almost everybody) 2-Speach pattern odd (Tala and Kai, when they have the tha little chat about Rei. "da hot?") 3- The improbabity of the flashback. (The little scene when Tala give a ride to Kai and the sort)
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