| "Yu Yu Hakusho meets Harry Potter" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: stix On: August 28, 2005 20:06 CDT
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i loved this story. it was so great. please add more to this story soon.
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Reviewed By: Fanfic Crazy Chibi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 20:58 CDT
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I think the story line is good... But I can't tell really... It confuses me... You have alot of Dialauge and not a lot of discripion... It kinda seems rushed... Just take your time and add some fluff to your story... Fix it up just a little bit... Describe their actions and sourroundings, their thoughts and feelings... You can do it!!!!!!
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Title: Strange, yet...
Reviewed By: RyutheIP On: December 31, 2003 05:10 CST
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I've given up on the ratting system for this site, so I'll just explain. You had few grammar errors which is good, but you should go back and look over your story. Disapparate is spelled with two 'p's I think.. I'm not sure though The only thing is, Yusuke has absolutely no shock in this. His mother died, and the love of his life got raped, in just about the same day. I have to admit, his reaction was weak. You should work on that. You have great talent as a writer,, now all you need is practice. This reveiw in hopes that you will update sooner :-P
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Reviewed By: YoukoKurama201 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 14:28 CST
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Man, I feel so sorry for poor Keiko, but I think I may feel sorrier for the guy who did it. Yusuke is going to murder him when he finds him. okay, questions: One, are Yusuke and Keiko going to be in the same house, so Yusuke can look after Keiko? Two, what year is this in? And three, u got any tips for fanfic writing? thanks!
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Reviewed By: Ookami Samurai [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 16:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, i'm not one for harry poter tales but your's is masterfully done, espacly with the kyko thing damn.
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Reviewed By: Vedelle [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 13:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really good please write more soon!!!
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Title: Please Update!
Reviewed By: Kitsune 005 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2003 20:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update this fic soon. Its great!
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Reviewed By: Egyptian_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2003 15:11 CDT
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wow this is soo kool pls dont take it off i'm dying 2 know ehat happens!
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Reviewed By: Egyptian_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2003 15:11 CDT
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......this is a..well neat fic! pls do something with youko kurama! pls he's my fav, character!
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Reviewed By: Egyptian_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2003 15:11 CDT
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......this is a..well neat fic! pls do something with youko kurama! pls he's my fav, character!
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Reviewed By: KuramaRose [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2003 14:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very good story in my opinion. Please update soon. ~Kitty~
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Reviewed By: Kirara_Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 23:38 CDT
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GOOD STORY!! i really like the beginning. (and how did Kurama get into the fight and sense what harry did to voldemort???) welp, i'll look forward to your next update! so UPDATE SOON!!!
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