| "The Fallen Royalty" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: ValliGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 04:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i thought that was a good first chapter. But um...... do you think there will be any more? Seriously it's been like 2 years and in those 2 years all you have to show for it is 1 chapter how lame. Whyed you stop? And I Like don't even know if you still check ur reviews!!! But whatever I reall do think it was a good ONE chapter and hope that maybe just maybe after all this time you could add some more?!?!
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Title: oh well
Reviewed By: physcho_bitch [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 20:59 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh god, you seriously have commitment problems... One chapter and off you go. Oh well. SO much for that, huh?
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Reviewed By: BeautifulFaerie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 00:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I think your story is really cool please update soon
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Title: I want a dove bar
Reviewed By: monkeymary89 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 03:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I love the story. Fuki, you are doing good and I hope you update soon. By the way, you and A_T and P_B are always talking about dove bars and it makes me feel left out. I'VE NEVER HAD ONE!!!!! *cries loudly* I promise I'll review if you update. And I'll give you a box of oreos if you let me have a dove bar. And then we can steal all the dove bars in exsistence and hide in my aunts yacht (shes freaken rich man!) and all 4 of us can share them. Then if you guys want we can scam my filthy rich aunt into buying me that tiger I always wanted and whater you guys want and then we can send the tiger to maul my stupid nieghbor who read this fic over my sholder and called it gay (I punched him when he did) and then we can rent an elephant and (*takes a big breath for the first time since I started the sentence*) then we'll get the elephant to domolish the school and . . . I've run out of ideas of things to do on a sugar high and I'm sure I sound crazy, but I am so I guess that makes sense. In short, I've never had a dove bar, my aunts filthy rich, I punched a guy (not the first time either that guy really gets on my nerves), the story rocks, and UPDATE SOON! @_@ *in fake rockstar voice* THANK YOU AND GOODNIGHT!!!!!!! (maybe I should lay off the sugar and get some sleep)
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 17:19 CST
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hee hee hee COOL STORY! Hmmm... Miroku is pretty smart in this one! He seems just like the real Miroku before he joined the group! Can't wait for the next chapter! ^-^ Dove Bars are gooooooooood (off in her own world thinking about ice cream)heh heh heh Ja!
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Reviewed By: Aurora_thorn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2003 14:00 CST
Comment/Review:
Thankz
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2003 09:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it please update soon bye
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Reviewed By: Fuki [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2003 23:36 CST
Comment/Review:
Mrf...
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Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2003 22:11 CST
Comment/Review:
nice beginning, good description, and i think that Miroku will be getting his ass kicked sometime in this fic by kagome. oh, and i think that calling someone psychotic may not be nice, but could be taken as a compliment. good luck with the rest tuki (lol, sorry, just had to do that)
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Title: Dranged fanfic lover
Reviewed By: Debbietherex On: October 30, 2003 21:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very good, please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Fuki [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2003 18:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ha, ha, ha. I should go to conseling and your name is physcho_bitch. Uhh-huh.
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Reviewed By: physcho_bitch [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2003 22:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
jeez fuzzball, you really have such a bad temper. I think you should go to counseling. It's really quite fun... you can play with squeaky toys and if your really special you get a room with padded walls all to yourself...*sigh*
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